Subject: [FFML] [FIC] [ALT] [RANMA] By the Pool of the Drowned Sensei, part 1, final version
From: "John-Martin" <johnl@tomatoweb.com>
Date: 9/16/2000, 3:24 PM
To: "'FFML'" <ffml@fanfic.com>

here ya go, final version unless I get some massive C and C
Disclaimer:  I don't own Ranma 1/2 or any of the characters in Ranma
1/2,  I am just playing with them.


By the pool of the Drowned Sensei, part one

by
John-Martin Lotz

The steps up to the Tendo Dojo were miles high 
and tens of miles long, there was a spotlight 
at the top shining on me.   A crowd of millions 
was watching me and I knew that there was  gallows 
at the top.  I smiled to myself as the vision of 
a bad historical film popped into my head.  This 
was Nerima Ward, in twentieth century Japan, and 
I was under some kind of weird curse.  Shaking my 
head to clear it of the images, I walked up the 
few steps that separated the real dojo from the 
street, and me, from the young woman who had been 
standing by the door watching my wool gathering.

"May I help you?"

"Yes . . . Is there a man, I mean boy, I mean girl
. . . person named Ranma here?"


The young woman wiped her hands on her apron, and 
tossed her long hair away from her face,  smiled at 
me, then asked in a quiet voice, the last question 
that I expected to hear, "Excuse me, but are you 
engaged to Ranma."

"Engaged?"  My voice raised about an octave, then 
I calmed, "NO.  There is something we share, and 
I believe that he can answer some questions."

She seemed about o speak again when a voice yelled 
out behind her. "Ranma NO BAKA, really try and spar 
with me.  Please just try and hit me."

"I told ya, I don't hit girls!  Even uncute tomboys."

"Ranma, you have a guest." she called out to the 
combatants, who came to a halt looking at me

She looked at me as I reviewed our conversation.  
"I apologize for not giving my name earlier, I am 
Kiratso Tomoe "

She bowed to me,  "Tendo Kasumi, and this is my sister 
Akane, and this is Ranma" indicating the dark haired 
girl and the red headed one I was seeking in turn.

The red headed girl smirked at me,  "Never seen you 
before.  You looked ready to mad back then.  Let me 
guess, Pop pissed you or your family off, and now you 
want to kill me.  Right?"

Her voice was pleasant and completely unafraid, actually 
more amused sounding.

She circled me, ending up in front of me again "I really 
don't like to hit girls, especially since you are no fighter.  
It wouldn't be fair, Nabiki could probably take you."

Now she really sounded amused.

I took a step back, that first question hadn't been the 
last question I had expected --  this one surely was, 
I had no idea how meeting this Ranma person would be, 
but  this was NOT it!!  Still I had to know the answers 
to my questions."

I looked at the sign advising challengers to bloody 
hand to hand combat to go around to the back gate and 
raised my eyebrow at the young women, "My god, she's 
serious, what have I gotten myself into?"

I handed Kasumi the bag containing a bottle of J&B scotch 
I had brought, then studied Ranma -- who was, in turn, 
studying me,  "Why did you  want to see me?"

I sighed and knelt down to reach into my handbag,  "It's 
easier to show then describe."  I pulled out two thermoses 
of water,  one hot and the other cold.

"Jusenkyo,"  he breathed, watching the steam rise.

Yes, he was the one.  I poured the cold water over my head, 
and . . . changed. In that other form, I looked up into 
Ranma's eyes and started to smile.   That smile froze, 
just like her eyes as she breathed, "You bastard!"  

She screamed again,  "You! . . .  You're!!" and dove at me.

I didn't think, I didn't have the time.  I just reacted.  
Before  I has fully aware she was attacking me, I found 
myself one my feet, fending off a flurry of punches, then 
suddenly in a courtyard, then 30 feet in the air, slapping 
Ranma backwards into a koi pond.

"Oh my."  I heard Kasumi say as she handed me the hot 
thermos and I reverted to my real self.   Just about then 
Ranma struggled out of the water and headed toward me.  Next, 
I found Kasumi between us.  "Ranma, stop!."  Ranma halted and 
she handed him the rest of my thermos, which she had grabbed 
from me.

I cinched my disarrayed kimono tighter as Kisumi continued, 
"Ranma, 'hot' water changed her into a girl, 'cold' changed 
her into that man."

Ranma, now male, put down the rest of the hot water, and 
stood there shaking, and I had to ask,  "Ranma, whose body 
is this, Obviously you know it."

He looked half ready to hit and half to cry as he said,  
"It's my father's and it's dead."  He spun away from Kasumi 
and stalked off.

Before he got two steps, he halted and not facing me he 
started talking, no longer the confidant self assured person 
who had ask me if I were out to kill him.  "I lost control, 

I apologize.  You see, last time, I saw that body, I buried it."

I could see Akane, hands over her mouth, collapse against a 
man who hurried out of the main part of the house.  Another 
girl hurried up, no doubt drawn by the noise of the short fight.

"How did you trace me here?" he asked.

"With all due respect, tracking an, uhm, well built, red headed, 
martial artist across China to Japan is not really all that hard."

He snorted at that.

"Actually, the crazy guy who pulled me out of the pool told 
me that the person whose body I at times wear was accompanied 
by a young man who fell into the pool of the drowned young girl.  
He described both forms to me."

He snorted again, presumably at my attempt at delicacy.

"Please, how is it that this body is so good at fighting.  It reacts
before I can think.  It also is not very popular."

Everyone was staring at me, mostly, and Ranma, some, as I continued.  
"I spent a lot of time during these past three months in this body.  
It's a lot safer being a man than a girl if you are crossing 
China alone."

The other girl who had shown up, didn't ask the obvious, why a lone
girl was in back country of China.  I would have hated to start off
lying to them too early.  

Instead, picking up the discarded bag with the bottle of Scotch, she 
peered inside, quirked an eyebrow, and  asked, "Not popular?"

"Yeah, the Abbot of the Wudong Monastery threw a dead cat at me."

Ranma shuddered.

"And a number of shop owners demanded payment.  I worked some of the 
debts off and the rest, I'll send them when I get it."

Now he was definitely smiling, "How many of them collapsed of the 
shock?"

There was a brief pause, then he continued, "When I buried my father, 
there was a post card in his pocket, addressed here.  Tendo-san said 
I was to marry one of daughters.  Do you know anything about it?"

I shook my head.

"No, I seem to have some of the reflexes that your
father had, none of the memories."

end part one

jml

John-Martin Lotz, MCP
johnl@tomatoweb.com 



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