Subject: [FFML] Re: [Xover] Converging Fates: Chapter Nine
From: "Master Pivot" <songoku@crystaltokyo.com>
Date: 9/8/2000, 1:29 AM
To: <AlphSailor@aol.com>, <kyle_emmerson@yahoo.com>, <ffml@fanfic.com>

Once more again, I enjoyed this treat from you. Judging from the
way thes tory's progressing, I'd say that we're fairly around the
half-way point. Which means things are bound to get intense
pretty soon! Yay! :)

Just two tiny nits:

  "Weird isn't the word," Sabing replied after having deflected the
dagger. "I mean, they're a helluva lot more developed, but not in all
ways. Their airship, for instance. It's nowhere near as fast at Setzer's
ship, but... It's more... I dunno, luxurious."

That's Sab_an_, not Sabing. ^_^

Sabin, not the dark and evil Saban.

And I dount that Setzer's airship would be faster than US military
jets. I mean, they fly at half the speed of sound. And they've got
jets that can go up to mach2, and more. :P

True, but no US military jet, or any other country for that matter, can
circle the world in a matter of minutes.


Phuc Tram
Master Pivot - Wielder of the Coherent Light Bokken
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