Subject: [FFML] Re: [C&C] Re-[Ranma] The Final Straw
From: "tor_onsen " <tor_onsen@my-Deja.com>
Date: 9/5/2000, 3:16 PM
To: ffml@fanfic.com
CC: ajaff@poky.srv.net
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tor_onsen@my-Deja.com

Sigh.  Tor no baka!
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On Tue, 05 Sep 2000 10:57:37   tor_onsen   wrote:

"Grr, why do we have to learn such a weird
language anyways.  English is just so, so
confusing!

anyways?  English is just so...  so confusing!

Should probably be:
language, anyways?  English is just so...  so confusing!


"Ah, gee Akane.  Well, uhh.."

Should probably be:
"Ah, gee, Akane.  Well, uhh.."

"Akane, I'd like to...  err, I wanna... geesh!
Man why can't I....  Oh, Akane, we need to
talk. In private."

Should be:
Man, why can't I....

Akane seemed stunned.   "Okay, Ranma," she
eventually answered.  "Let's head up to the
roof, shall we. 

Should be:
"Let's head up to the roof, shall we?

Sorry about that.  If you find more Tor Travesties, please feel free open fire.

Tor


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