Angus MacSpon wrote:
Nobody noticed the elephant become extremely nervous at that point.
Hmm, is the Tendo house a lot bigger than I remember? Otherwise
an elephant is going to do quite a bit of damage. (How did he get
through the door, anway?)
Nice choice, though. Genma as an elephant ... *snicker*
Wel, since this was a teaser, I didn't write the name of the spring
Genma was thrown into by Ranma and Nuku Nuku. Here it is:
"Spring of Drowned Flying Pink Elephant Cub"
Now he fits into the house as well as a panda. ^_-
Hmm, a thought: Has anyone done Genma as a wombat? Or has John Biles
got the whole species earmarked for private use? :)
Genma'll beg to be something normal, even a wombat, before this's over.
And I haven't even mentioned the Spring of Drowned EVA yet...
Thinking it over for a moment, Nuku Nuku latched onto Ranma's arm and
cried out cheerfully, "Nuku Nuku not mind!", silently adding to herself
that maybe they could sell the elephant to a zoo.
Or, if Nabiki can get hold of a howdah, maybe he can actually earn
his keep.
As the next fragment shows, Ranma doesn't really need to work for a
living. :)
"Um, before I could take you on that training journey, Nodoka made me
promise that I'd become a cybernetologist among cybernetologists, or you
and I will commit seppuku! You even signed it with a fingerprint!"
"Is cybernetologist even a word... Hey!"
Cyberneticist, isn't it?
I dunno, really. I just wanted some weird word nobody understands. I'm
going to use your suggestion from now on, though. It's even a real word
and everything! ^_^
Well, if you liked it and would like to see more soon, you know what to
do. And if you think it sucks, that's ok too. ^_^
Hard to say from this much of a sample, actually. It looks pretty nuts,
but of course that's not necessarily a bad thing. :) You'll just have
to write more so I can judge if you should write more.
(Hmm, there seems to be a small flaw in that argument. Oh, well,
probably nobody'll notice ...)
Cheers,
Angus
I guess I'll have to post the first chapter once I edit it.
Corwin