In a message dated 8/12/00 9:22:23 PM, GlaziusFalconar@peoplepc.com writes:
Title: The Princess And The Pirate
Chapter: 5
Series: Tenchi Muyou OAV (with a bit of the TV series mixed in)
Genre: Adventure/Science Fiction
Author: Komodo
Email:kyhdin@aol.com
Homepage: http://www.geocities.com/Area51/Keep/5268/Fanfic/fanfic.html
Archived At: Same
Date Sent to FFML:7/27/2000
Size: I'm guessing it's below 10k.
Series Summary:
Tenchi's the new Emperor of Jurai, he's married to Sasami, and he's
sent Ryoko and Ayeka to the Planet Saradin to assassinate the criminal
mastermind known as the Kingpin and then take his place.
Episode Summary:
Azusa stands revealed as the criminal mastermind known as the
Kingpin. With Ryoko flying Misaki and Funaho back to Noa, Ayeka must
face her father alone.
It was interesting enough... I actually didn't mind the sidelights much...
but, sidelights notwithstanding, there's not really much _here_. I'll say
again that the FFML doesn't make demands about production every so often,
and that if you've got a piece that can be serialized, consider sticking
a couple of these smaller parts together. Otherwise, you get Dragonball Z
in convenient fanfic form.
I agree, it was a bit short. However, the sidelight is the most important
part of the chapter. I am planning on turning this into some kind of series.
Eventually. I guess I'm gonna need a name for it.
Agreeable Komodo
He who bought it, supplied it.
Just say yes to prophylactics.