Subject: [FFML] Re: (Lemon)BGC Blues 5 : Illusions 1/5
From: Shehulk
Date: 8/8/2000, 8:34 AM
To: ffml@fanfic.com

At 09:14 PM 8/7/2000 -0600, you wrote:

A fine display of phony theatrical grief.  The person I loved most 
recently died.  It's not like that.  Not, at least for someone who 
normally keeps her feelings to herself.  You break down and cry at times
when you can't bear it any more, but you don't go around screaming for
the benefit of the audience.

**Guess what? Everbody handles grief differently. No matter what kind of
person they might appear to be. I'm sorry for your loss, but when I wrote
this I had to draw on my own losses. Grief that crawls inside of you and
begins to shred you until you're not sure that the next breath is worth the
effort. A sense of incompleteness that frightens you because you're not
sure you can function without that person. And let me tell you that when
the reality of this finally begins to sink in that screaming is the
smallest reaction that you can have. An audience? The world has long since
ceased to exist when all you want to do is die to end the pain.




       Leon hated to tell her this but she needed to know. "Both
vehicles exploded on impact, Sylia. We didn't find enough to make a DNA
match, but it was Priss' bike and we found... that."


Only an idiot would buy that story.  

**Hmm, a one of a kind design and the inability to sense Arashi and
Priss...seemed pretty reasonable to me. Guess you're just too smart for
this story.

      "You have information that we require." She shrugged faintly.
"It's my job to extract that information."

       "What information?"

       "The names of the other Knight Sabers."

Well...duh.  Let's start with her lover and her two closest living friends.

**This is Genom. If they didn't immediately piece together that Dr.
Stingray (whom they had murdered) had a daughter and son that might come
looking for revenge and were probably responsible for the Knight Sabers,
then no, they wouldn't draw the obvious conclusion. 



The KS are all lesbians?  Oh, what am I asking?  Of course they're all 
lesbians.
They're anime females.

**Actually they aren't all lesbians. Of them all I think that Priss is the
closest, but their relationships grew from their friendship. Nene loves
Linna because she's Linna, not because she's a woman. The same holds for
Sylia. It's Priss' personality that draws her. Might be hard for you to
grasp, but try.

**As to the rest of the things you took pot shots at I have two words for
you... artisic license.

**Obviously this story pissed you off on many levels and I apologize for
that. However there is a remedy....the delete key.


Chaos reigns within.
Reflect, repent, and reboot.
Order shall return.



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