Greetings,
I assume this story was inspired from the Pokemon movie (correct me if it is
not), but I think it was way too short. However, it represent an aspect of
the Pokemon phenomenon that was never explored before (as far as I know). I
think it represent a great potential for future Pokemon fan-fics. Does
anyone has any ideas of how to develop further this aspect?? I wonder...
Well I might, I'll see what I can do.
This is wrong, we realize. WE are the fighters, WE are the warriors. We
are the ones with the great abilities, the powers, the skills to hurt, to
destroy. We battle, they raise, we fight, they train. We fight, so they
don't have to. We fought, and this human died to stop us.
A human is dead. Pikachu weeps. Lightning strikes.
Lightning strikes... From the Pikachu, maybe? (joke)
Seriously, the anime doesn't seem to look much into the mind of a Pokemon
(at least not as much as you are doing)
I like your style and what you are trying to do. Great description, BTW.
It comes to us now, as we look upon our weeping brother, upon the friend
he
mourns. The great gift that they give to us freely. This is why we
battle
for them. This is why they cry for our hurts, they take joy in our
victories, they wish to see us better ourselves. They give us their love,
and we give them our might.
A great subject for several fan-fics. I don't know what else to say, sorry.
We all weep now, for the human that has given his life to save us...
..from ourselves.
Hmmm... Protect us from ourselves? Maybe this Pikachu could teach us a
thing or two?
See you,
Fardoche Trevelian
P.S.: I think You just gave few a good idea to a lot of authors.
P.P.S.: A lot of people, I think, are eager to see more of OMB (* insert
crazy laughter here, along with some people dressed in white lab coats *,
how many questions about this series have you got? You know, it's so
popular, people can't help themselves but wondering about it)
P.P.S. : Please excuse the grammar or syntax errors, along with some strange
looking words, english is not my native language.