Hiya, Elsa-san. ^_^
Title: Forgotten Future, Forbidden Past
Episode: Chapter Nine
Genre: Drama, Original Flavor
Author: Lady Ice
Email: ILadyIce@aol.com
Homepage: http://www.crosswinds.net/~waraku
Archived at http://members.tripod.com/~tina97/sm/
Date Sent to FFML: July 10, 2000
Archive Number: 12541
Size: 15 KB
Title Summary:
A terrible tragedy befalls the Sailor Senshi in the past, and a new
future arises from the ashes. In Crystal Tokyo, a select few try to
right the wrong, and change their world into the place it was destined
to be. But not all are willing to see their dark world die...
Episode Summary:
Iroiro finds out Haruka and Seiya have a child, Daburu and Akasia run
into Rei, and Faustine's double finally shows up.
Note:
Subject header of post reads "[FFML] [Fanfic] [Sm] FFFP, ch. 9".
Review:
The problem with this fic is the fact that this can be quite confusing if
the reader isn't familiar with the earlier parts.
True. I'll go back through the chapters, and try to flesh them out a bit. I
think after part 5, the fic started scaling the "Newbie: Umm... Huh?" wall of
doom. ^_^;
WIth that said, this is a pretty nice fic on the overall, though your style
seems to
be pretty minimalist.
Yes, minimalist for now... It's helped me get as far as I have in this story.
But, hopefully, as my skills and confidence improve, it'll start fattening
up, if you know what I mean. ^_^
Anyway, keep up the good work.
Thanks so much, Elsa. I appreciate the comments.
Ja ne,
~ice