In a message dated 8/1/00 3:57:33 AM, aerolbj@i-next.net writes:
Title: The Princess And The Pirate
Episode: Chapter 4
Series: Tenchi Muyo OAV (with a bit of the TV series mixed in)
Genre: Adventure/Science Fiction
Author: Komodo (who does trim his hair with hedge clippers, and it shows.)
Email: kyhdin@aol.com
Homepage: http://www.geocities.com/Area51/Keep/5268/Fanfic/fanfic.html
Archived at above (Though I should probably redesign it one of these days.)
Date Sent to FFML: July 18, 2000
Archive Number: 12733
Size: 26 KB
Title Summary:
Tenchi's the new Emperor of Jurai, he's married to Sasami, and he's sent
Ryoko and Ayeka to the Planet Saradin to assassinate the criminal
mastermind known as the Kingpin and then take his place.
Episode Summary:
Lots of drinking, Ayeka and Ryoko kick some butt, Ayeka comes face to
face with the Kingpin. Ayeka calls the governor.
Review:
One of Mr. Komodo's better works, this is pretty interesting,
Please, just "Komodo" will do nicely.
though the prose is a bit wanting at times for more details.
The sparse prose is to force the reader to use their imagination to fill in
the blanks. It's a long held belief of mine that people who need every detail
spelled out for them shouldn't be reading fiction in the first place. Still,
perhaps a bit more detail is in order. I'll work on it.
Anyway, a pretty good stab at things and a nice enough read.
Thanks! I do strive for qaulity in all my works.
Agreeable Komodo
He who bought it, supplied it.
Just say yes to prophylactics.