Subject: [FFML] Re: [FFML][Ranma][WoF] #38: Dreams Never End
From: David Johnston
Date: 7/19/2000, 6:44 AM
To: Razorclaw X
CC: ffml@fanfic.com

Jumping in surprise Mousse turned around, raising an
angry fist. "Can't you see I'm busy, Kid?"

"Kid" isn't a proper name or title.  

 "You were going over my resume," Kanna answered, "and
gave love advice on the side."

"and giving" flows smoother

 "Nothing ever goes the way you planned," Sypha
replied. "Your infinitesimal jealousy is barring your

infinitesimal?  If it is that small, it shouldn't
bar anything.  

he hadn't enlisted help. These days in Tokyo Ranma knew
very few people he trusted enough to help him with such
a delicate task as to cater to Akane's needs, so he had
to find the right people. He always had Ryoga's help,
but his aid was few and far between, as it was always
dictated by his travel. Tatewaki and Kodachi were
always too eager to help, which is why Ranma never

Wow.  That Akane's insatiable.  

middle of nowhere. And since I don't have parents to
mind, and since most of the people we want to come are
here in Japan...."

Given that they are the leaders of a quasi-nation, not having 
the wedding there is distinctly odd.  

 "That was her idea," Shion corrected. "So I have deep
pockets; I can afford to give her this good a gift."
 Of course, we just can't say where we got that money
from, Nabiki thought.
 "Just as long as you know what you're doing," she
said, breaking the heated engagement. "So long as

What heated engagement?

 A moment later Konatsu peeked his head inside. Unlike
the others he was still wearing his ninja outfit, and

Surely he'd be wearing a nice kimono.  

 "Screw the principle!" Shizuka yelled, her emotions
boiling over. "Here's the other part of my story: I had
to shoot another person to gather my scruples again. It
wasn't as bad as the first time, and the circumstance
wasn't nearly the same as the last time, but it didn't
hurt as much. That's probably not a good thing; just
another thing to kill my soul...."
 "Wait," interrupted the bride. "You're trying to tell
me that it's okay to fight without weapons? That it's

Shizuka:  It's always you-you-you isn't it?  What about me?  

priestess joyfully. "Why didn't I think of that?!" she
exclaimed happily.

Shizuka:  You did.  I wasn't saying anything like that.  

double and even triply hard to please the writer that
sold thousands of copies of his first book.

"who had sold"

head, remembering suddenly that of all the hospitals
in Tokyo, they managed to pick the one Kodachi was at.
Or, rather, the one Nabiki picked.

Now that sounds like a fun hospital.  

 "Maybe you're right," conceded the priestess, "the
others probably aren't as forgiving as I am."
 "You're too much, to a fault, almost."

"To a fault."

Tens of thousands if he really wants to impress the caterers.




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