Kotaro Shindo wrote:
Hey there,
I just had a pretty good idea for a fic and wanted to post it...
Kotaro Nibunnoichi: A Ranma/Kotaro Crossover Fanfic by Mark Marquez and
Robert Cunningham.
-snip to EOT-
(Wha' d'you think? Send C&C to kotaro326@hotmail.com)
I liked the Kotaro stuff, mainly because it was unfamiliar. The Ranma
section at the beginning was the same old/same old. Worse it failed to
give the hook that is going to bring the characters of these series
together. I suggest that the hook be given early and that you drasticly
cut back on the 'Ranma has to fight everyone on the way to school' routine.
Think more like the beginning of the first movie, where they buzzed through
that very fast and it was just a device to have all the main cast present
when first Li Chi and then the Seven Lucky Gods showed up.
Michael Gilson /8^{)