Subject: [FFML] Re: [C&C][Fanfic][Ranma] Kasumi 1/2, Chapter 5 (Teaser)
From: "Richard Person" <richbp@ix.netcom.com>
Date: 7/9/2000, 4:23 AM
To: "Nibun Yuri" <pinku_chan@hotmail.com>, "RaeMowse@aol.com" <RaeMowse@aol.com>
CC: "ffml@fanfic.com" <ffml@fanfic.com>

On Fri, 7 Jul 2000 18:04:52 -0700, Nibun Yuri wrote:

into the young girl's body as she focussed upon the target of her
malevolence.  She glowed an ebon light as her eyes narrowed, her tears

focused.  Is there such a word as ebon?

Yes, actually.  It's an adjective derived from the word "ebony".

Ebony
Date: 14th century
      1 : a hard heavy wood yielded by various Old World tropical
           dicotyledonous trees (genus Diospyros of the family
           Ebonaceae, the ebony family)

A synonym of "ebon" is "black".

It's also an attempt to use a 'fancy' word in place of a 'plain' one.
 If I were to rewrite that line I might say:

She glowed with an  ebony aura which seemed to absorb the surrounding
light.  Her eyes narrowed, her tears flowing as she stared at Ranma.

But then, that's just me.


Richard Person
Seattle
<Where the Sunshine, dry or wet, never ends>



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