On Wed, 5 Jul 2000, C. Jones wrote:
The prince stood to his feet and brandished his spear
at the martial artist. "You speak so rudely to a prince
Extra tab in the middle there.
Ranma walked over to the prince who was busy trying
to stop his nose from bleed. "Okay," Ranma demanded. "Tell
me why you wanted to kidnap Akane."
nose from bleeding...
Over all not too bad. The only thing is Ranma seems to have too much of a
clue compared to what I'm used to.
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