Wow, after such a long time I'm happy (and surprised) to see this series
continue.
This chapter looks very clean as far as spelling, grammar, etc. I do have a
couple of fairly minor suggestions on the story itself:
1) IMO, it would have been nicer to directly see the scene where Ranma's teacher
suggests he do his make up work at the Informer. Hearing it secondhand via the
conversation with the Horny Duo kind of diluted the impact of it for me.
2) Ranma and Norry having to work together is a nice plot twist, but it seems to
me that there should've been more tension between them in the last scene. It's
nice that they're giving each other a chance, but I think each of them would
likely have some serious reservations about the whole thing -- if not conflict
between them, then at least some foreshadowing of conflicts likely to arise
later -- and I'm not sure this came across quite as well as it could have.
Looking forward to reading more whenever you get a chance,
Gary