Inspired by various fanfics, including a recent
one...
Ah. I take it you don't like that kind of fics?
Personally, I feel neutral about them, but then it's
not overdone... yet.
"I'm a martial artist too, you know!" shouted
Akane. Ranma slid
away in the early morning dew. "You don't have to
go this easy on
me!"
You'd think he'd be a little more considerate,
the girl thought.
No wait, he probably thinks this is considerate.
It IS better than him actually taking her
seriously, though. One blow from him would likely land
her in hospital, and then all of Akane's attempts for
diplomacy and "better start" would be for naught.
You could say that he could fight back without
risking hurting her, but Akane would have to talk him
into it.
She leapt after the retreating boy, who was
really beginning to
irritate her. Her trying to be nicer didn't make
Ranma enough less
of a jerk to keep from triggering her temper, it
seemed.
"Come back here so I can swat you!" she cried.
Ranma stuck out his tongue. "No way!"
Notice though, he isn't insulting her. I would
say that's a substantial improvement. Akane getting
offended by the gap in their skill levels is her
problem, not Ranma's.
Ranma fled the room anyway.
The wisest thing he did in this fic.
Nice parody, but when are you going to get
around
to your earlier fics? I'm getting tired of waiting.
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