On Wed, 21 Jun 2000, Andrew wrote:

3. Finally, dialogue seems a little stiff towards the end. In addition, wouldn't
Konastu have harder time not calling Ucchan as Miss Ukyou? Just a thought.

Just one thing to remember: that phrase is only gender-specific in English...



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