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From: Richard Robinson [mailto:RICHARDROBINSONJR@prodigy.net]
Sent: Sunday, June 18, 2000 11:24 PM
To: D.F. Roeder
Cc: FFML
Subject: Re: [commentts] [Ranma - A!MS] [Revised] The Accidental
Goddess 4
"Well, why not?! Ain't there a kami for busses?!"
Skuld bopped her on the head. "No, there isn't!"
Oh Nabiki! We want you to volunteer for a job. we need
someone to be
the new Kami for busses. That will help pay for what you did to
Ranko, or we could use a tester for Urd's potions.
That would be just desserts, of a sort. :)
"I wouldn't wait, Akane-chan, if this is what you truly want. Once
it really sinks in that Ranma may not be able to take
over the dojo,
Daddy's going to start wondering who to engage you to for the sake
of the Art. Grab him quick. Take him! Before it's too late on any
front."
You know this does explain why Genma and Soun like each
other, they
are alike. Selfish and thoughtless, stupid and cowardly,
both set a
goal and will sell out anyone to achieve that goal. Whatever the
cost in human lives and pain is fine as long as they achieve their
goal, other people's pain and suffering anyway. Son or daughter,
wife or child, will be sold out as long as Genma and/or Soun get
what they want. I have this feeling Ranma isn't going to
see much of
either after death, not if he's living in Heaven anyway.
Perhaps not.
Flash. Flash. Flash-flash. Before she knew it, Nodoka was
surrounded
by a small mob of curly heads... and the occasional
feminine hairdo
representing those goddesses of flexible tastes.
Greek gods, the difference between them and demons always
eludes me.
The more stories from then I read the less I would like
to ever meet
any of them. Arrest the whole bunch for rape, torture and other
assorted crimes. Most of them make Happosei look undersexed and
wholesome.
Well, they do make for interesting stories, then and now. ^_^
Belldandy stared at her tea. "Oh... dear." She thought
for a moment
before looking up and smiling. "I'm sure Saotome-san
meant well and
was only looking out for Ranma-san's future."
I would truly love to have all three of the goddesses look up
Genma's record on the yggdrasil and comment on it and
him. I suspect
even Marller would despise him.
I suppose even demons have their tastes.
*BOING!!* "Maaa! Kawaiiiii, ne?"*UNBOING!*
Of the whole series this was perhaps the most inevitable scene and
the most Excessively Cute and Waffy of the millennium. I honestly
couldn't picture those two together without expressing
some kind of
affection, please note affection not sex.
Duly noted, and thank you for the compliment. :)
"Ranma," he whispered, "I'll get you for this. Send *me*
to a place
that won't let me have my darlings, will you? Grrr!"
Well it ain't called Hell for nothing, Happi.
I preferred the original armory scene but the revised
version is ok.
All in all I liked this story very well so far, it
started well and
has been improving as you go along.
Thanks! And thanks for the C&C. ^_^
Ja!
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D.F. Roeder
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