"Crazy Fic" <crazyfic@hotmail.com> wrote:
Oh yeah, another thing. If you're an Akane such that you kiss the ground
she walks on, feels that she should always get Ranma and have a happy life,
or to the extent that you have dreams of being in bed with her.... you
probably shouldn't have read this far. Then again some of you probably
would have wanted to be the one who received that package.
I'd tell you that this kind of warning belongs at the beginning of the
fic, but I have the sneaking suspicion you knew that. :)
As for this story... sorry, but it wasn't believable. The Akane here is
at best a shallow caricature of Takahashi's character; why should I care
what happens to this character when it obviously isn't the one I know?
Read the manga (some of which you can download at
http://ranmascan.dhs.org) to get a better feel for the character, and
try again.
Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics.html