I still have a problem with Sylia revealing her secrets to Kit so
easily. A slower build-up and more indications that she's researched
his background, or at least asked him a few questions on his opinion of
vigilantism and boomers might help.
The word is _rogue_. Not "rouge", "rogue". If boomers suffered from a
syndrome that caused them to blush uncontrollably, people would have a
lot less to worry about. Also, you want to look for all those "its"
which mean "it is" and turn them into "it's".
Quincy 2040's name is "Rosenkreuz", I believe. It certainly isn't
"Roeschroyitz"
Sylia should probably tell the girls that the "Phantom" is on the way
with the batteries, and deal with who the Phantom is later.