Subject: [FFML] [Fanfic][DB]Saiyan Goodbyes Chapter 3
From: Snapdragon1186@aol.com
Date: 6/15/2000, 6:58 PM
To: ffml@fanfic.com

Hello everyone! Sorry this took such a long time to finish, but I got bogged 
down with school.  This chapter takes place some twenty years before the main 
story, and is sort of a prelude explaining the relationship between the King 
(who is at this time the prince) and Baradock.  I really need feed back for 
this chapter, so anything you have to say will be very welcome.  Previous 
chapters are found at  
http://www.crosswinds.net/~rhionae/storytime/guest/lerrico/.  Thanks to 
Rhionae for hosting it.  Go check out all her stuff 'cause its really good!  
All C&C are welcome ( yes, even flames!).  
                                                Liz E.  

Standard Disclaimer- DBZ is owned  by Akira Toriyama ( or however you spell 
it), not me.  No infringement is intended.  

* * * * *
Chapter 3  "What Needs To Be Done"



*24 years before* 


        An inky black sky loomed over the smoking remains of a few small 
houses.  The buildings were utterly decimated,  barely a wall left standing.  
 Brilliant flashed of light illuminated the distance, as if stars rained down 
upon the world.  Beside the remains of the village, a scrawny figure 
struggled  to his feet.  Moaning softly, his glinting red eyes searched in 
the darkness for an object unknown.  The  curving tips  of the creature's 
lethal ivory fangs gleamed as a grin spread over his face.  A cold, leather 
piercing laugh echoed through out the empty night.  They had won the first 
battle, but the troops were readying.  They would not win again.

*****
         The Saiya-jin troops swarmed over the country side like a ravenous 
pack of hunting wolfs.   The reptilian inhabitants of the valuable planet 
were few and far between, not that they would have stood against the brute 
strength of the Prince's personal troops if their numbers had been ten fold.  
  The planet would succumb; they all did.  Then it could be "cleansed" and 
sold.  Such was the business of the Saiya-jin.  
    
* * * * *

        Baradock lounged sleepily on the springy, grass covered ground.   The 
prince had ordered his battle squad to remain behind, once again. That 
arrogant fool had always seemed to have something against his squad; 
assigning them the worst swampy backwater planets and the oldest out of date 
equipment.  One of his soldiers had nearly lost a leg when a faulty space pod 
exploded.  It was just the sort of thing one of those inbred royalers would 
do.  Mind you, he didn't really mind that his soldiers were getting hurt, 
that didn't bother him at all, it was just that the prince took such pleasure 
in ridiculing and humiliating him. Besides, whenever those little accidents 
occurred, the prince's royal investigators always found them to be Baradock's 
fault. Too many wrong doings would get you kicked out of even the corrupted 
Saiya-jin army. Perhaps if he had not been so disrespectful to the prince as 
a child......, but there was nothing he could do about that now.  One day he 
would get his revenge, and for now he would have to be content to wait until 
that day.  

      Sighing, he rose slowly and walked over towards the bustle of the main 
camp.  Unless the profile on this planet was unusually inefficient, and that 
was unlikely, considering the accuracy of the reports  Freiza's  scouts sold 
the empire, he would spend his time monitoring  the incoming messages from 
Vejita-sei and encrypting messages to be forwarded to the other planets in 
the empire, hardly suitable work for a captain.  As he idled beside the mound 
of ashes left over from the bon fire last night, a tallish soldier who he 
couldn't put a name to paused beside him and saluted  in the usual Saiya-jin 
manner, fore arm raised and palm spread wide.  
    
        "Captain Baradock, a message from an unknown sender has arrived. It 
has been tracked down to one of the troops dispatched  to the East side of 
the planet.  It was marked urgent."

        So, one of the prince's little puppets had sent an urgent message.  
That was most unusual.  It was indeed a rare day when one of them would call 
Baradock with something as important as to be coded urgent.  Perhaps the day 
would not be as boring as it had seemed would be the case.  With a curt nod, 
he dismissed the soldier.  

      The soldier left Baradock as he walked towards the squat, makeshift 
building that housed the large alien computers that the Saiya-jin used.  
Several guards nodded briefly at him as he entered.  The machine was not so 
valuable that it could not be replaced, but the King had decided it was too 
dangerous to be without communications if it broke due to someone's 
tampering.  The few Saiya-jin technicians would probably just do more damage 
to the thing.  He chuckled to himself.  It was truly amazing how many of his 
people were ignoring the native calling of their blood, and instead of 
becoming the warriors they were meant to be, became artisans, scientists, and 
merchants.  It was one of the greatest shames of the Saiya-jin.  Some even 
speculated that the empire would eventually disappear, as the number of 
soldiers grew less and less, and then the empire of Freiza would eventually 
overrun and capture the homeworld, and enslave them all. 
    
         That, of course, was the underlying reason that this mission was of 
the utmost  importance.  Many people, some of them the king's own top 
councilors and  advisors, were tiring of the old king and his old fashion 
ways.  The general connects confirmed that the hierarchy needed some new 
blood, a fierce king ready to defend the honor and pride of his people at all 
cost.  The prince promised that and more.  He would rise the empire to new 
hights.  The Saiya-jin would once again be the dominant species in their 
corner of the universe, and eventually conquer the empire of Frieze.  Then, 
the future king would shout to the masses who gathered for his boastful 
speeches, then the Saiya-jin  would claim their rightful place as the rulers 
of the galaxy.  Exalted by some, and feared by all. 

         This was the prince's final test.  It was quite obvious to all what 
was going on in the king's mind when he  had not assigned one of his top 
commanders to accompany the prince on his mission, as was customary.  He was 
testing his son.  If anything out of the ordinary occurred, anything at all, 
then the king might well continue his reign until another prince was born.  
Who knows?  He may already  have a "replacement" prince waiting in the wings. 
 It would be infinitely simple for someone of the king's power to arrange for 
the gene banks to have a duplicate of the prince incubated.  He had heard 
rumors of late that the banks may have even found away to speed up the growth 
process.  He grimaced at the thought  of multiple princes being available on 
short notice. This was a most critical time.  Yes, every one was quite 
certain that the destiny of this planet was heavily entwined with  the 
destiny  of the empire, and Baradock had to agree. 
    
      He suddenly noticed that several of the techs were standing in 
attention waiting for him to address them.  Blushing heavily, he cringed at 
the thought of the prince discovering his newest and least favorite captain, 
who was also his sworn enemy,  getting lost in thought while he was supposed 
to be answering a possibly critical message.  
     
       " Um....Yes, please report."  Sighing sullenly, he winced to hear how 
new and inexperienced he sounded compared to the other officers on this 
mission.  It was no surprise that only a few of the new younger cadets would 
obey his orders. Most of the older soldiers would just walk away.  It was 
certain that was what their prince had ordered them to do. 

     "Sir, an encrypted code arrived from approximately latitude forty-four 
degrees north, ninety-seven degrees east.  It requires a class III security 
code to view "

     "Thank you.  All of you are dismissed." Baradock walked up to the low 
iron table that held  the dull metal machine.  Randomly punching in the 
letters of his clearance code, he waited impatiently while the machine, an 
older model, processed his request.  The letter appeared on the screen, 
glowing a soft florescent green. The purpose of the letter, which was once 
quite unsure, had become crystal clear after merely reading the first line.  
He read in disgust the prince's mockingly sweet words. Only Vejita would be 
petty enough to do this. He was not a soft fool.  He was not!  As burning red 
anger filled his heart, the words seemed to run together, forming the too 
familiar face of the man he held in such loathing.  

     Outside, Baradock fumed past the bewildered guards, and into the silent 
darkness of his tent.  Privacy was a very important benefit of being promoted 
to an officer.  It was hard to compare the spacious tent he had to use now 
with the cramped barracks of the common third class soldier.  And yet, he was 
a third class soldier.  His power rating could barely compare to those of his 
fellow officers.  As much as it shamed him to admit it, one or two of the 
soldiers under his command could even muster strength greater then his own.  
Baradock  wasn't the only soldier  shocked at his selection, even with his 
father's power over the king. That day had earned him great prestige, to be 
sure, but it had also earned him more then his fair share of enemies.

     Still, a few people had wondered about the identity of this mysterious 
officer.  Anger cooling, his thoughts drifted back to the first time he had 
seen Tycho.  She had been one of the captains administering the exam needed 
to enroll in the Saiya-jin armed forces.  There was nothing at all that set 
her apart from the other females of her class, except perhaps the first class 
fighting power, a rare and prized trait in a woman.  Shoulder length black 
hair sticking out in spiky masses,  misleadingly slight build, wide brown 
eyes creased in a scowl;  she was absolutely average, but something about her 
drew him.  After the second session which she had led, Tycho had challenged 
him, as was customary, and, despite his lose, he had found himself deeply 
enthralled with her.  Before long they had been married.  

     This behavior had not  impressed his superiors at the time.  Marriage 
was heavily discouraged, except to solidify a family's standing.  It was 
considered an inconvenience, and selective incubation was more efficient in 
weeding out the bad traits of the species. At most, marriages were simply for 
physical pleasure. Most females didn't bare young anyway, so one  hardly even 
needed to form a long lasting relationship. You simply chose someone to have 
a child with, and went through the procedure. The necessary "ingredients" 
were collected from all citizens when they reached maturity.  To have a 
child, one simply had to fill out a few forms.   Afterwards, it was not 
necessary to see your mate until you retrieved the child from its planet.  It 
was not the Saiyan way to worry about things involving thought or emotions, 
they were strictly a physical race.  Love, the actual emotion, was a feeling 
unknown and scorned.  

      Closing his eyes, Baradock sighed.  He had often attempted a discussion 
of the subject  of love with Tycho, but true to her heritage, she would 
mearly stare at him oddly for a moment, and scowl, claiming she must have 
been insane to mate with such a half-wit fool.  He sometimes wondered if she 
was right, perhaps he really was just a foolish dreamer.  That was probably 
it.   After all, he had been labeled as an idiot his whole life.  Even his 
father had threatened to disown him.   If so many people recognized it in 
him, it had to be true. A crestfallen expression appearing on his face, he 
left the lonely solitude of his tent.  If he was a fool, then at least he 
would be a fool who did his job.  

* * * * *

     The tech who was trying to establish video connection was quite baffled. 
 It could not be denied that he was not quite a genius, but the basic 
training he had received should have at least allowed him to pull up a simple 
visual connection.  He ran through the procedure in his mind once more; open 
connection screen, enter outgoing coordinates, verify coordinates, enter 
security clearance code, send data, wait for conformation, pull up 
communication screen.  Yes, it all went as it was supposed to until the 
conformation from the receiving location.  He would wait, yet no answer would 
come.  It was almost as if no one was at the other end.  Perhaps they had 
just moved the receiver.  That was always a possibility.  Still, he should 
probably inform the captain. Hopefully, Baradock wouldn't be too angry about 
his unauthorized actions. One never knew what those soldiers would do to stay 
out of trouble.  There were far too many strange tales and disturbing rumors 
circulating around the camps theses days for one to ever let his guard down.  

      "Captain, Sir, I cannot establish a visual contact with the coordinates 
you gave me. Either the team is not at that location, or their equipment is 
broken.  I just felt...um...you should be informed."  He gulped down those 
last few words, as Baradock's eyes tightened into tiny black slits.  The 
captain always had been prone to extreme mood swings, and it was a rule of 
thumb in this troop to steer clean of him when he got angry.  

     "Of course you cant fool. There is nobody at that point. It was........a 
decoy! Now listen, I am going to leave camp to address the problem.  It is 
none of your concern."  Baradock earned several curious stares as his ranting 
took on a slightly maniacal tone.  "You, you, and you, you will accompany me. 
Mizar, you will be in charge here. No one," He paused dramatically here.  "No 
one will try any thing that will get me in trouble."

     As he turned and motioned for the soldiers who were to accompany him to 
follow, most of the crowd stood rooted to the spot.  Something was defiantly 
wrong.  Leaving a troop without a superiors permission was punishable with 
death.  Most of them had always had their suspicions about Baradock's sanity, 
but this confirmed it.  The man was completely insane.

*****

       Wispy, curls of steam drifted lazily over the black of the lake.  It's 
surface bubbled violently, and an odd smell of cooking meat wafted through 
the air.  Frowning, Baradock knelt down and touched the hissing water.  He 
pulled back suddenly, holding his hand and yelping.  Shooting a reprimanding 
look towards the soldiers, he cursed himself silently.  Always making myself 
look like an idiot, he ranted to himself.  Baradock inhaled deeply, and 
focused on the boiling lake.  It would take a tremendous amount of heat to 
make such a vast body of water so hot.  It most certainly couldn't have been 
a fire.  Racking his brain, it dawned on him that a ki blast, if large 
enough, could boil that much water.  Surely, that must have been it.  What 
else could produce such  results.

      Baradock glanced around, searching keenly for evidence to support his 
theory.  And it was there, hidden under the faint signs of a hurried and 
haphazard cleanup.  Rusty blood stains marring the ground, grass trampled and 
flattened by the tread of heavy boots,  spots of burnt foliage punctuating 
the field, to Saiya-jin eyes such as his own, trained in battle since 
infancy, these told a story, the story of a brutal and bloody battle.  

     Baradock rose, and turned towards his companions.  An odd gleam in his 
eye, he pondered them thoughtfully for a moment. He smiled in a fashion that 
was almost happy, for a man of his nature and race.   "I have a question for 
you three.  Can any one tell me what has happened here? Have the trainers 
taught you well enough to piece together this puzzle? Well?"

     The three men glanced at oneanother uncomfortably.  They were new to 
this squad, and as of yet, were quite uncomfortable with the captain's rather 
unorthodox and slightly eccentric ways  of dealing with those in his command. 
 It didn't help them that Baradock tended to talk rather...oddly to those in 
his troop.  Murmuring slightly, they looked a way from Baradock.

     "Ah..so the prince's little trainer's haven't taught you everything.  
I'll tell you then, yes, I'll tell you.  My friends, the blood that is 
spilled on this ground is Saiya-jin blood. It is seeping down into the bowels 
of the planet, leaving mark of the victory."

     Baradock glared , as if daring them to deny him.  He knew he was right, 
the earth here was saturated with the blood of his people.  This was a most 
interesting development.  He gazed to the horizon, wondering if the rest of 
the Saiya-jin troops were losing, the injured lying on the cold ground, pain 
echoing through their bodies.  It would be the honorable thing to do if he 
were to go and assist them. With as many warriors as he commanded, he would 
surely make a difference in the battle.  But should he? That was the 
question.  There was no real reason that he should help the man who's mission 
in life it was to torment and degrade him. Perhaps he would go just to gloat 
and revel in the prince's defeat.  The joy it would bring him to behold the 
broken and bruised body of his enemy; to finally behold his conquest over the 
that brat;  his heart swelled with happiness as he made up his mind to go at 
any cost.  There are some things in one's life that just cant be missed.

   * * * * *  

     Baradock flew silently through the empty sky.  He turned his scouter on, 
hoping to find the location of the Saiya-jin troops.  He normally didn't use 
the thing, as he found its constant beeping and blipping rather annoying, but 
he had to admit that it did have its uses. Peering through the red lens, he 
watched as weak signals zoomed across its screen. Most likely just a few herd 
animals.  Sighing, he looked away.  Suddenly, a barrage of numbers flew 
across the screen.  Nearly a dozen rather strong individuals, mingled with 
dozens of smaller ones, were located almost due west, over the snowy capped 
peaks of the nearest arms of the planet's one great mountain range.  Baradock 
 skidded to a halt, and turned abruptly towards the mountains. He sped 
onward, vigor renewed,  smiling all the while at the thought of being the 
solitary bystander at the prince's undoing.

* * * * * 

       Baradock had landed about a half a mile away from what he supposed was 
a primitive native city.  It would be far to dangerous to land in the actual 
battle field.   He had proven his suspicions correct. This was indeed the 
site of the battle.   Even at this distance he could make out the long 
mournful cries of those who had become casualties, and the exhausted screams 
of those who fought on. He crept stealthily through the shady forest, careful 
not to wander or change directions.  Such minute noised as the whisper of the 
wind through the bare branches and the crackle of dry fall leaves under foot 
made a shock run up Baradock's spine.  Adrenaline was already rushing through 
his bloodstream, filling his with the irresistible urge to hurt and main and 
draw blood.  To leave his enemy, no....victem, dead on the ground.  His 
muscles tensed as he drew nearer to the fighting.  Yes, this was what it 
meant to be a Saiya-jin.

      Very soon, he reached the eves of the forest.  The city lay spread out 
before him,  injured and weak.  The rents that were torn in the grassy path 
ways seem to Baradock wounds; the essence of the city slowly oozing out.  But 
as he saw the struggle within; the serpentine creatures who called this place 
home fighting vainly against the ruthless invaders, knowing that any minute 
they might lay dead, yet not surrendering, as most would have done; it was to 
him as if the city struggled against it's wounds, painfully rising to its 
feet, readying to strike back.  This was, in his opinion, a very bad sign.

       Calmly, Baradock entered the city, minding to walk around the piles of 
corpses that had accumulated in the street, drawing the crowds of gluttonous 
insects and uncouth vermin from their dark lairs.  He was certain that, lost 
among the rambling roads and quaint buildings, there was conflict here;  he 
could feel it in the air, ominously overshadowing the city.  He went onward,  
every so often catching a glimpse of the snakeish things who had built this 
metropolis.  They were an unusual race.  In his ten years of service, on his 
dozens of missions to all reaches of the universe, he had never come across 
creatures quite like these.  They had elongated bodies, lacking any notable 
arms. Two small unstable legs helped to steady the beast. The heads were 
nearly humanoid, if a bit green, with the exception of the long, cruel fangs. 
 They spoke in a slippery lispish tongue that Baradock, with the sensitive 
ears of a Saiya-jin, could barely understand, despite the fact that the 
version of standard they spoke was fairly ordinary.  Still, despite what ever 
anomalies in their evolutionary history might have caused them to take on 
such a cumbersome and unwieldy form, they should by all rights be dead now.  
There was no explanation for their success. 

       Baradock slowed his pace now, as the shouts and explosions grew 
louder.  As he rounded a corner, he came to face a large spread of 
desolation.  Nearly everything in a wide radius was flattened and broke.  He 
peered forward, hoping to see something in the muddy distance.  Suddenly, an 
ear wrenching scream blasted his ears.  Dozens of the natives were slithering 
towards him, all bearing large, cruel guns and menacing expressions.  A 
momentary paralysis froze him to the ground.  There had to be literally 
hundreds of soldiers marching towards.  Where were they all coming from?  
Suddenly, a thousand roaring bullets rushed towards him.  Even in his shocked 
stupor, he couldn't help a chuckle.  Why, they still used actual metal 
bullets.  Most planets atleast had a low level of laser technology. If it 
weren't for the sheer overwhelming amount of the bullets, he would simply 
brush them aside.  Then, suddenly, a heavy thing struck his head, knocking 
him to the ground. Incoherent blurs of pictures and sounds swirled about in 
his head.  Growing steadily, a loud roar, like that of rushing water, filled 
his ears.  The ground under him shook and trembled violently with many feet.  
All of this became distant and detached soon, as if he were sinking in to a 
long, deep, endless well of black and mist.  Finally, everything quieted and 
settled down as he slipped into the murky depths of sleep.  

* * * * *

       The sweet woody smoke of the fire drifted into the crisp starry night. 
 The glowing red and yellow tongues of flame danced and whirled playfully as 
the embers floated peacefully down to the grassy floor, like fireflies one 
might find on a muggy summer night.  Against the backdrop of a tumbling 
cement wall, the shadows of the fire played out their performance, a 
senseless, endless dance, beautiful as it was dangerous.  Yet the play of the 
fire went unobserved, for the only figure around the fire lay motionless, but 
for the occasional moan.  A the reason for this was obvious.  Large sickening 
burns, just beginning to heal, hid most of his face and left side.  A wicked 
cut sliced across his chest, the heart was obviously the target.  All of his 
skin that wasn't cloaked in blanket had begun to bruise a sickly yellow-green 
color that made one quite ill to look at.  

      Anyone could see that this man was much in need of rest, that much was 
obvious to even the most untrained eye.  However, one might find it odd that 
no medicines were cluttered about, or no vigilant nurse kept watch over her 
charge.  Except for the loud crude echoes of song that sounded from a distant 
bonfire, not a soul was here to comfort his twisted dreams. Twisted they must 
be, to see the looks of horror and disgust that alternately swept across his 
face.  The mind had difficulty imagining what beast could torture a man so.  
So terrible was his face, one might imagine him as a frightening beast; 
moaning, as he did ever so often, in a painful inhuman way. Man or beast, it 
did not matter.  No one could see his pain wracked form, frozen still in the 
cool night air that slowly blew down from the crisp snow crowning the bald 
heads of the distant, shadowy mountains.   

Continued in Part 2 

    


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