Snip stock dojo opening scene. Again, does this have anything to do with
your story? It's such standard stuff that it's more likely to bore off
readers than anything else.

It certainly bores you.  But is there any real reason to believe that it
bores readers in general, rather than just poking one of your sore spots?



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