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[SailorMoon / Gen13]
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Title: Moonlight Heroes
Episode: 5
Genre: Crossover
Author: Skyrocket
Email: skyrocket35@hotmail.com
Archived at http://www.fanfiction.net
Date Sent to FFML: May 26, 2000
Archive Number: 11025
Size: 12 KB
Series Summary:
Anime's favorite magical girls met comic's hippest teens. A call from
the past of John Lynch has brought the Gen13 kids to Japan. All they
want is a nice relaxing vacation. But unbeknownst to them, their
arrival in Tokyo has garnered the attention of the Negaverse.
Meanwhile, Raye is having bad dreams - dreams that end in the death of
the Sailor Scouts.
Episode Summary:
Following their battle at Juuban Mall, the two teams take some time to
lick their wounds and plan what to do next. But the Sailors had better
think fast. Gen13 are on their trail and the hunt leads them straight
to the Cherry Hill Temple.
Episode Summary:
Information is exchanged as Gen13 and the Sailor Scouts compare notes
and get to know each other. But unbeknownst to our heroes, Malachite is
back with a new plan. A plan to which John Lynch is the key.
This is awkward. Really, really awkward and buggy in places. Not all the
Senshi are so fond of clean breaks with the past... Usagi and Minako would
probably be the only ones who'd really accept any story at face value.
If you recall Raye held on to her suspicious until both she and Luna sensed
their was no evil in Gen13. Amy was positive they weren't from the Negaverse due
to her computer readings. With that in hand I can't see any reason why they
would continue not to trust Gen13.
The Three Lights don't show up until a couple years down the road, so the
mention here makes no sense at all,
Just because we didn't see them doesn't mean they weren't around. Bands need
time to build a fan base. Anyway, that was mostly meant to be an in-joke for SM
fans.
and how come everyone can _speak_
Japanese? The Senshi certainly can't manage English very well, except for
Minako and Ami.
That was explained back in the first part of the story. Gen13, being
superheroes, got their hands on some translation gizmos that let them speak and
understand Japanese. Chalk one up for comic book science.
The whole piece feels... unpolished. Character X says
something, character Y reacts, and so on and so on, down the rosters of both
sides. There's not much to keep me reading, really, because I don't
understand anything about half the cast and whatever implied parallels there
are just soar over my head. If you're appealing to a wider audience, you may
want to state things a little more explicitly.
I included a fairly detail biosheet on all of Gen13 with the first part of
the story. Go reread it and things should become more clear.
Skyrocket