Gary Kleppe wrote:
BTW, are Ranma and company Chinese in this? I won't complain about all
the Chinese people who have Japanese names, but if Ranma isn't Chinese
than the language barrier should be an issue here.
The story appears to be a fusion with the movie, "Soldier" so it is
likely that the Amazons are some kind of separatist group from a
futuristic interstellar culture.
Overall, you have a pleasant writing style, and very few grammatical
problems. The story seems a little low on the conflict factor;
presumably we're supposed to be worried about Pantyhose and company
tracking Ranma's group down, but that part of the plot seems very much
in the background at this point.
Well, that was how Soldier went. Of course the theme of this story will
have to be somewhat different because the Amazons are not pacifists. In
Soldier, the central theme was that even though peaceful people may wish
they could do without men of war in the long run they can't. Here, it
seems more like a Seven Samurai theme, that defending your home and
people is not just the responsibility of a martial elite, but the right
and responsibility of every citizen.