Summer job keeps me busy. So these reviews are late and
confused.
Re:[FFML] [Fanfic][Eva][Draft] Tracks: Part 4
Date: Mon, 29 May 2000 20:54:24 -0400
From: "platypus3333" <platypus3333@yahoo.com>
To: "FFML" <ffml@fanfic.com>
Comments: this is extrodinarily funny stuff, with the various
incarnations of the three main characters bouncing around
between time, space and various dimensions and such. The pacing
is fast (at some points the narrative breaks down a bit, but the
author himself notes this) which keeps the jokes moving. I'd
like this to continue (as well as the Tenchi fic with the
different universe characters interacting. I couldn't help but
think of it when I read Tracks) Recommended.
Re:[FFML] [FFML][BGC][2090][DRAFT}A Knight Alone - Chapter 8
Date: Mon, 22 May 2000 05:25:27 +0100
From: "Alex Gray" <hitomi@ndirect.co.uk>
Organization: http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Subway/7630
Comments: Another fine installment to a strange and interesting
series. A few formatting errors have crept in, and there were a
couple of grammar mistakes, but nothing was too serious. If I
had to say one thing about this part it would be "and the plot
thickens." Just one thing: how many lesbians are there in this
story? (note: not a complaint) Recommended
Re:[FFML] [eva][elseworlds] The Gods Within Part 3
Date: Thu, 25 May 2000 23:34:53 +0800
From: Scriviner <ebon@i-manila.com.ph>
To: ffml@fanfic.com
Comments: Man this series rules. The narrative is a little rough
around Asuka's TV jump, though I like the description of Asuka's
powers. I was looking forward to seeing Rei in an invisible
plane though (kudos on her personality, by the way). I really
enjoy the explination of the powers, too. And the Kaji/Misato
(or whoever at Gehirn) interplay is extrodinary. Highly
recommended.
Also a brief note on my reviewing: I don't generally review
things that I don't like. Thus the lack of any 'not recommended'
stories in my reviews.
Jerico