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From: Jon the mockingbird <yaanathn@hotmail.com>
To: <ffml@fanfic.com>
Sent: Sunday, May 28, 2000 3:37 PM
Subject: [FFML] [fanfic] [Neon Genesis Evangelion] Impact: Chapter 1.0
Author's note: this chapter is planned out, but difficult to write for
some
reason. This is the first half of the chapter, dubbed Chapter 1.0. It
may
seem a little empty for now, and thus feedback upon where more information
could be needed would be appreciated. Some scenes were purposely left
dwindling, but I wonder if that sentiment has spread to the rest of the
chapter somehow... 1.5 will have more plot than 1.0, which can't stand on
its own very well. Also, feedback on the feel and tone of this chapter
would be appreciated.
Impact: a Piece of Neon Genesis Evangelion Fanfiction
By Jonathan Wang
Chapter 1.0: Overtime
I demand more. Rarely has an Eva fic touched me in the same why that I was
touched when writing my own BoE. The characters have changed, and they do
not know why. I hope you continue this, because I hope to continue reading
it.
Kevin Callahan