Angus MacSpon <macspon@ihug.co.nz> wrote:
The Chronicles of Votar the Mighty
Nice parody, and certainly well-deserved, but it kinda loses something
by your having to explain it in the author notes. If you don't think the
story stands on its own as written (and I'd have to agree) you might
want to make it more explicit in the story itself.
It was a pleasant day, and the birds were singing. The sun
shone brightly, and the sky was very blue. Everything was just
spiffy, and Ranma was happy that his life had absolutely nothing
to do with the sage of Votar the Mighty.
Um, or something like that. You can probably do better, but I think you
get the idea.
Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics.html