Subject: [FFML] Re: [C&C] Synopsis List Review for May 12
From: Skyrocket
Date: 5/21/2000, 7:33 AM
To: "ffml@fanfic.com" <ffml@fanfic.com>

[Oh My Goddess! / Buffy the Vampire Slayer]

Series Summary:

The power of the Hellmouth has drawn Mara to Sunnydale.  When the
goddesses learn of her location it becomes a race against time to stop
Mara from possibly unleashing a great evil into the world.  But all is
not as it seems.  Somewhere in the shadows someone is watching.  And
everything is going as they desire.  Can even the combined might of the
Norns and the Slayer stop Mara from destroying the world?

Episode Summary:

Explanations galore!  The goddesses and the Scooby Gang finally get
together and exchange information to try and figure out what Mara is
planning.  But unbeknownst to them they're being watched...

Review:

Pretty nice exposition chapter. No complaints about it, though there are a few typos.
And I loved the Giles nervous breakdown. ^_^ Pretty good. Keep up the good work!

    I guess now would be a good time to say I'm taking a break from this story. I need some time
off to rest, get my head in order and such before I plow ahead. But rest assured, there will be
more.

Title:  Fun With Minako!


Summary:

Just a bit of ecchi fun. ;)  Ami finds a post on the net that causes
outrage among the Senshi.  To even things up with the otaku hordes, the
Sailors decided to riff the post MST3K-style.  But they keep getting
distracted...

Review:

Two words: No comment.

    Aww...That's no fun. ;- ;

[SailorMoon / Gen13]

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Title:  Moonlight Heroes
Series Summary:

Anime's favorite magical girls met comic's hippest teens.  A call from
the past of John Lynch has brought the Gen13 kids to Japan.  All they
want is a nice relaxing vacation.  But unbeknownst to them, their
arrival in Tokyo has garnered the attention of the Negaverse.
Meanwhile, Raye is having bad dreams - dreams that end in the death of
the Sailor Scouts.

Episode Summary:

Gen13 hit the streets of Tokyo!  But a dinner with their mentor's old
friend goes wrong and soon John Lynch is in the hospital in serious
condition.  Unbeknownst to the young heroes, this is all part of a plan.
Malachite is scheming to get the Silver Imperium Crystal from Sailor
Moon, and he plans to use Gen13 to do it.  It's Gen13 VS the Sailor
Scouts with the fate of the world as the prize.

Reviews:

Well, another pet peeve of mine. I hate Gen 13.

    And I'm their biggest fan. No kidding. I've had about eight letters published in Gen13 (and
about that maybe in its sister book, DV8)  in the last three years. Heck, some of the people at
Wildstorm, the creators, know me by sight. ;)

And I also hate the NA dub.

    When I wrote this about a year ago I was just getting into anime fic. The story was aimed
mainly at folks in the comic book fic world, where I did most of my work then. They, if they knew
SM, would mostly know just the dub I figured. Plus, I wanted to make it understandable to people
who might not know either.
    Honestly, I've never seen the difference between using the JP and NA names. If the story is
good it shouldn't matter which version you use.

But, hey,
I'm not supposed to be biased and I do read everything... anyway, the fact still
remains that I'm kinda disinterested. Maybe it's the title,

    Come on, I spent a long time trying to come up with a good title. "Moonlight Heroes" seemed
perfect when I finally thought of it.

maybe it's the Gen 13, maybe it's the name Malachite...

    I always did like that better than Kunzite. Malachite sounds like a good villain name.

well, the prose is fine though it still needs a bit of polish. Your Brimstone Raising fic, IMHO,
is better than this one. Sorry.

    To each his own. But I'll say MH is far from the last you'll see of the SM/Wildstorm universe.

Skyrocket




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