Hiya kiddies!
Anyway, I was going to release C&C for Jitou's Master of Mosquiton
and Raye Johnson's excellent FY altfic Starlit Reflections when
fortune dropped into my lap. Also I was going to do some stuff for some
of my loyal fans. Okay, fan. Yes, Tobias, i'm getting around to it. My head
is aching and I just found some interesting stuff to read in my Archives while
I was hooking up my new computer, giving me a complete set of three which
have been now dubbed as the Magi systems.
Fortune as in a new computer I managed to snatch from uncle's company
trash bin! HAHAHAHAHA!! I can't believe why companies throw out these
perfectly fine computers, of course my hard drive sounds like a gargling sailor
everytime it processes and the CD drive has that really frightening sound when
it starts on my CDs but they're fine! ^_^
And as always I started once again on what has become a fine Elsa Bibat
tradition when receiving a new computer: breaking it in via the hardest usage
ever! ^_^
Anyway, after playing seventy hours of non-stop violence of the bloodiest games
in history(i.e. Lemmings and Civilization), I finally decided to get back to work. ^_^
As always, this is all my opinion. No one else to blame but me.
The FFML Synopses List
======================
For the week of: May 12, 2000
Moderator on Duty: Nikholas "Switch" F. Toledo
Synopses Submitted: 28 (3 for May 13)
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[Bubblegum Crisis]
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Title: Bubblegum Chaos: Mote in the Eye of Eternity
Episode: Part 10: Eternity's Number
Genre: Continuation
Author: Jerico Mele
Email: jmele@brandeis.edu
Homepage: http://www.brandeis.edu/~jmele
Date Sent to FFML: May 7, 2000
Archive Number: 10320
Size: 14 KB
Series Summary:
A continuation of the events in Bubblegum Crisis, slightly altered. The
next generation of Knight Sabers fight against the spectacularly
powerful Genom corporation.
Episode Summary:
The purpose of Genom's research is revealed as Isis plots against
Quincy's final plan.
Review:
Anyway, I've not exactly been following this series, so I may get confused a little.
Well, most of the previous chapters managed to catch my attention and I'm looking
this over. Something which is quite hard to do since my new computer is the one
I'm using and I haven't got around to linking this up to the computer I used awhile
back.
>From what I see, the fic still has cosmetic problems: formatting and etc.
On the story department, I've gotten myself a bit interested in the plot and am quite
interested on how this turns out. Pretty fair piece of work on the overall. Keep
up the good work.
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Title: Bubblegum Cross
Episode: Part 20: The Body Electric
Genre: Continuation
Author: Andy Skuse
Email: askuse@home.com
Homepage: http://www.ravensgarage.com
Archived at http://www.ravensgarage.com/fics/bgcross/bgcross.htm
Date Sent to FFML: May 9, 2000
Archive Number: 10353
Size: 72 KB
Series Summary:
It is the year 2038. The Knight Sabers have existed peacefully in
obscurity, ever since the AD Police finally shut down Genom, the boomer
manufacturer who also dealt globally in corruption and greed. Their 5
year hiatus is about to be disturbed, as a long-lost relative drops into
Sylia Stingray's life, and explains why her data cartridge has the
number "2" on it.
Episode Summary:
Blackie asks Dr. Raven about dreams. Sylia investigates her father's
notes on consciousness transfer technology. Blackie and Priss play
their first gig at Hot Legs and things start to "heat up". The cyborgs
close in.
Review:
Hey, I first read BG Cross a few years ago and I wondered if it were dead or something.
Nice to see one of the first and best BGC fanfics I've read is still going. Anyway, Andy's
style has definitely improved from the first parts. Considering that this fic has been going
on for years now, that is to be expected. ^_^ Keep up the good work and it seems the
fic is finally reaching the finish line. Advanced congratulations!
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[Bubblegum Crisis / Ranma 1/2]
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Title: Just Won't Die
Episode: 1 parts 1 through 6
Genre: Crossover
Author: Jeffrey "OneShot" Wong
Email: jeff.oneshot.wong@juno.com
Homepage: http://www.anime.sobhrach.com/~jeffwong/index.html
Date Sent to FFML: May 2 through 13, 2000 (in 6 posts)
Archive Numbers: 10098, 10136, 10167, 10279, 10360, 10544, resp.
Size: totalling 335 KB
Series Summary:
Since the death of his family, Ranma has had a personal vendetta against
Genom and their creations. He comes back to Japan after a decades-long
training trip a changed person and with every intention for vengeance.
He mistakes the Knight Sabers for a new breed of boomers and attacks
them all viciously. The Knight Sabers fight for their lives as they
face off against not only a very powerful Ranma, but a very angry one,
too. They, too, don't realize their opponent is human because no human
can/should wield such power.
Episode Summary:
The battle between Ranma and Knight Sabers take place.
Review:
Popcorn fics are what I usually call this. Lots of action and stuff like that, kinda like a
HK action movie. I definitely enoyed it though it snapped my disbelief straps a few times.
For good mindless action fun, you can't come better than this.
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Title: Singularity Tokyo
Episode: Chapter 3
Genre: Cont / xover
Author: Battlekrome
Email: battlekrome@hotmail.com
Homepage: http://members.xoom.com/Battlekrome/
Date Sent to FFML: May 8, 2000
Archive Number: 10326
Size: 22 KB
Series Summary:
A story of the Knight Sabers. Aika and Yuri a new pair to help with the
struggle against Genom.
Episode Summary:
Boomers get blown to bits. Big hit is planned.
Review:
Okay, your formatting sucks a bit. Fix it. The BGMs are kinda irritating. Your
prose and action writing is pretty good, however. But I'm kinda turned off from the series.
It has kinda like a self-insert fic feel to it. Sorry.
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[Devilman / Neon Genesis Evangelion]
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Title: Dema-fa
Episode: Chapter 07
Genre: xover
Author: Tom Mathews a.k.a. Disruptor
Email: mathews1@gte.net
Homepage: http://home1.gte.net/mathews1/
Archived at http://home1.gte.net/mathews1/fanfic.htm
Date Sent to FFML: May 7, 2000
Archive Number: 10283
Size: 16 KB
Series Summary:
Shinji is rescued by a mysterious boy calling himself Dema-fa.
Episode Summary:
Dema-fa gives Shinji and Asuka a disturbing lecture.
Review:
Considering I don't know what the hell is going on, mostly because I don't have
any of the early chapters and I know nothing about Devilman, this fic is pretty
average. Nice action writing though. And, well once again I have the feeling this
isn't going to be anice crossover. Sorry.
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[DragonBall / Ranma 1/2]
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Title: A Twisted Fate
Episode: Chapter Three: Of Bokkens and Oni, Part 1
Genre: Alternate Reality/Fusion
Author: Rainman
Email: raemowse@aol.com
Archived at http://lwf58.tripod.com/fan_fiction/raemowse/
Date Sent to FFML: May 5, 2000 (in 2 posts)
Archive Numbers: 10251, 10252, resp.
Size: totalling 46 KB
Series Summary:
Instead if falling into Nyaniichuan, Ranma crashes into a forbidden
spring called Iseijinichuan, Spring of the Drowned Alien. Now whenever
he's splashed with cold water, Ranma becomes a Saiyajin. Upon returning
to Japan, Genma takes Ranma to the Tendo home and winds up engaged to
Kasumi.
Episode Summary:
A mysterious girl that can fly and throw fiery ki blasts comes to Nerima
looking for Ranma and Furinken High School. Kasumi shows Ranma the way
to Furinken, but they have to detour to Dr. Tofu's clinic. Once he
finds out about the engagement, he taps a delayed shiatsu point to
immobilize Ranma's legs for a while as an impulse. Arriving onto
Furinken, Kunou attacks Ranma, who he thinks is trying to seduce Akane.
After the fight is over, the now Saiyajin Ranma gives Kasumi a surprise
most unexpected, then goes to school. The strange girl from the
beginning of the chapter finally lands at Furinken High School and plots
the death of Ranma.
Review:
A pretty good chapter. And I see you've managed to balance Ranma-Saiyajin a little.
On the overall one of the better Ranma/DB croosovers. At least this one's a bit serious. ^_^
Keep up the good work.
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[Master of Mosquiton / Samurai X (Ruroni Kenshin)]
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Title: Master Battousai: The Romance of a Meiji Mosquiton
Episodes: Parts 2 & 3
Genre: Alt. Fantasy Fusion
Author: Jitou
Email: jitou@geocities.com
Homepage: www.geocities.com/jitou.get
Archived at www.geocities.com/jitou.get/fanfic.htm
Date Sent to FFML: May 10, 2000 (in 2 posts)
Archive Numbers: 10422, 10421, resp.
Size: totalling 98 KB
Series Summary:
What happens when you cross a blood-sucking vampire and a pacifistic
rurouni? Yep, that's right.
Episode Summaries:
ii. Three Words -- Flame is Bad - Kenshin and Inaho return to Japan.
Zanza the Honou is revived.
iii. Opening Doors - The Kenshin-gumi arrive at the Kamiya Doujou. What
kind of family life awaits a two-hundred year old,
pacifistic killer oni?
Review:
You know, I was oing to give an in-depth review of this, but hey, this got to me first.
Anyway, it's "Tasukete" not "Dasukete", young man. ^_^ And the Kamiya Kasshin
Ryuu Ougi is the Hadachi, Swordbreaker, a cool technique where the person breaks
the opponent's sword with his bare hand. Got to see Yahiko perform this in that cool
RK sidestory by Watsuki. Want to see what Yahiko would be like after a few years?
Get a copy of that one.
Anyway, pretty nice story and one of the few MoM fics out there. Bonus points all around
though if you are going to use Nihongo, double-check it. Keep up the good work!
This is a must read folks, so go read it. And Jitou, this is much better than your
other work.
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[Neon Genesis Evangelion]
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Title: And So It Begins...
Genre: Alternate Universe, Shortfic, Crossover with Real Life(?)
Author: Adrian Forest
Email: dalziel_86@hotmail.com
Homepage: http://www.geocities.com/dalziel_86/index2.htm
Date Sent to FFML: May 10, 2000
Archive Number: 10380
Size: 9 KB
Summary:
Ever wondered what would happen if events from EVA started to happen in
the real world? Second Impact *is* this September, you know...
Review:
Weird. Other than that no comments.
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Title: Ascent of the Fallen
Episode: Part One: "And now art thou cursed from the earth..."
Genre: Action, drama, suspense, some WAFF
Author: Sparky Clarkson
Email: sparkster@writeme.com
Homepage: http://members.tripod.com/Sage_Ohlmin/evafic.htm
Archived at http://members.tripod.com/Sage_Ohlmin/ascent/ascent.htm
Date Sent to FFML: May 10, 2000
Archive Number: 10427
Size: 47 KB
Series Summary:
In the darkest hour, a light from heaven brings new hope. Mankind's
once-bleak future now offers a glimmer of promise. Yet humanity's
protectors must battle not only the angels from above, but also dark
forces from within. An ancient evil seeks to use their greatest hope as
its key to power. Unless the Evangelion pilots can use their own inner
strength to defeat the overwhelming odds, all will be destroyed. Can
mankind survive the ascent of the fallen?
Episode Summary:
With Kaoru dead and Asuka in a coma, Shinji is losing his tenuous grip
on sanity. Paralyzed by her own grief, Misato cannot help him. They
both find comfort from unexpected quarters, even as Gendo brings NERV
towards a confrontation with SEELE. Makoto makes a mature decision,
while Rei's actions awaken some bittersweet memories...
Review:
>From the first chapter, this is going to be probably one of the more well-written EVA fics
floating around, though the prologue was kinda weird. A sterling first chapter, Mr.
Clarkson. Emotions were described and evoked efficiently and the prose and character
interactions are simply beautiful. I especially liked the press conference bit. ^_^
Keep up the good work!
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[No Need for Tenchi!]
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Title: Mayuka gets it - Directors cut
Episode: The sickest ones - part 1
Genre: Lemon, Lemon, Satire
Author: Byooki Desu
Email: puppet_master@darkmail.com
Date Sent to FFML: April 18, 2000
Archive Number: 9410
Size: 33 KB
Series Summary:
This was originally an intent to do a parody on all Lemons but evolved
into something grotesque.. So.. It got me thinking, what if I continued
this? An' henceforth the "Sickest Ones" Saga was born.
Episode Summary:
A strange dwarf of a man finds one of "the Ten o'clocks assassins"
discarded manuscripts and re-writes it. Well, uh, that's the basic
plot.
Review:
If this weren't a satire, I'd be going over there to your place and trashing your computer. ^_^
Other than that, no comments.
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[Oh My Goddess!]
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Title: More Human Than Human part 1
Genre: drama
Author: James Chu
Email: patch_boy@hotmail.com
Homepage: jchu.simplenet.com
Date Sent to FFML: May 12, 2000
Archive Number: 10520
Size: 12 KB
Summary:
Love is easy, right?
Review:
A nice first chapter.Though a bit slow. Anyway, waiting for the next chapter.
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[Oh My Goddess! / Buffy the Vampire Slayer]
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Title: Brimstone Raising
Episode: 7
Genre: Crossover
Author: Skyrocket
Email: skyrocket35@hotmail.com
Archived at http://www.fanfiction.net
Date Sent to FFML: April 29, 2000 (in 2 posts)
Archive Numbers: 9980, 9981, resp.
Size: totalling 30 KB
Series Summary:
The power of the Hellmouth has drawn Mara to Sunnydale. When the
goddesses learn of her location it becomes a race against time to stop
Mara from possibly unleashing a great evil into the world. But all is
not as it seems. Somewhere in the shadows someone is watching. And
everything is going as they desire. Can even the combined might of the
Norns and the Slayer stop Mara from destroying the world?
Episode Summary:
Explanations galore! The goddesses and the Scooby Gang finally get
together and exchange information to try and figure out what Mara is
planning. But unbeknownst to them they're being watched...
Review:
Pretty nice exposition chapter. No complaints about it, though there are a few typos.
And I loved the Giles nervous breakdown. ^_^ Pretty good. Keep up the good work!
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[Pocket Monsters / Star Wars]
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Title: Poke` Wars Episode V: Team Rocket Strikes Back
Genre: Fusion
Author: SAMAS
Email: SAMAS_1@hotmail.com
Homepage: samas.freehosting.net
Date Sent to FFML: April 28, 2000
Archive Number: 9946
Size: 186 KB
Summary:
Empire Strikes Back, Pokemon Style. The rebels flee giant Venasaur
walkers, hide in the belly of a giant Gyarados, and Brock trains hard
under the tutelage of master Mew. But Rock Vader holds a secret that
can shatter Brock's world (and if you don't know what that is, you need
help!).
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Title: Poke` Wars Episode VI: Return of the Gym Leader
Genre: Fusion
Author: SAMAS
Email: SAMAS_1@hotmail.com
Homepage: samas.freehosting.net
Date Sent to FFML: May 3, 2000
Archive Number: 10135
Size: 198 KB
Summary:
The Poke' Wars Trilogy reaches its explosive conclusion! Team Rocket
constructs a second massive Deathorb, while Brock, Misty, and Gary
battle the vile gangster Snorlax the Hutt for the life of Ash Solo. The
Rebel fleet goes toe-to-toe with the Empire as Brock fights for the soul
of his father against the Rocket Emperor, MewTwo!
Review:
I'll just review the two fics simultaneously.
You know, this is actually pretty good for a Pokemon fic. If it weren't in script form.
Other than a few of the jokes fell flat, well, this is a good fic to read while you wait
for the pot to boil.
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[Ranma 1/2]
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Title: Childhood of a Modern Dynasty
Episode: Epilogue: Childhood's End
Genre: Continuation
Author: Jim Lazar
Email: jimlazar@earthlink.net
Homepage: http://home.earthlink.net/~jimlazar/anime
Date Sent to FFML: May 10, 2000
Archive Number: 10463
Size: 102 KB
Series Summary:
A series chronicling sixty years of Akane Tendo's life.
Some happy moments and some sad. Akane and Ranma love each other, but
is that enough to keep them together? Will James Davidson ever finish
the book on Akane's life he is writing? Not if his fiancee, Hanaki Ono,
keeps distracting him.
Episode Summary:
Childhood's End. Painful memories are left behind as they make their
way into adulthood. But the pain isn't over, so enjoy the good times
while you can.
Review:
Cool. Jim keeps up the quality of the series up to the end. One of the bigger Ranma series
out there and one of the best. Keep up the good work!
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Title: Mirror, mirror.
Episode: Chapter Seven: The Hunted: A pig's story.
Genre: Alternate Universe
Author: Michael Ricketts
Email: ricketts@upnaway.com
Homepage: http://www.upnaway.com/~ricketts
Date Sent to FFML: May 11, 2000
Archive Number: 10459
Size: 98 KB
Series Summary:
Before leaving China, straight after getting his curse, Ranma utilizes
an Amazon treasure "The Phoenix Mirror" - the mirror of rebirth - to try
to cure himself. Of course, this being Ranma, nothing goes to plan.
One mishap later and Ranma winds up controlling two bodies, his original
one and a copy of his cursed body. Unfortunately for him, he can only
control one body at once with any degree of fine control... or can he?
Episode Summary:
Ryouga arrives at Furinkan and finds that Ranma is indeed hiding the
'cure' for Jusenkyo's waters from him. We find out where the Mirror has
been for the last six chapters and why Po Xion is like she is. We get
to see more of the original battle and more of the motivation of whoever
is playing around in Ranma's head. More fun than ever! :)
Review:
A good chapter on the overall. Few typos here and there, of course. The Shiratori
scene was really ...er... cute. ^_^ Anyway, keep up the good work!
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Title: Second Chances
Episode: Chapter 17 - Lip Service
Genre: Start Over
Author: Lord Archive
Email: archive@mich.com
Homepage: http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Fuji/9061/anime.html
Date Sent to FFML: May 11, 2000
Archive Number: 10502
Size: 13 KB
Series Summary:
Akane makes a wish after the death of Ranma and ends up returning to the
day she met him. This time she plans not to repeat any of her mistakes.
(Just make a bunch of new ones.)
Episode Summary:
Akane sets up the fight against the Golden Pair, but at a price she did
not expect.
Review:
Another great chapter, Lord Archive. Your Ranma fics are probably one of the few things
that are keeping my faith in the genre. Keep up the good work!
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[Ranma 1/2 / Robotech]
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Title: Silent Battles
Episode: Chapter 3: First steps
Genre: Crossover
Author: Latin_D
Email: latin_d@uol.com.ar
Date Sent to FFML: May 12, 2000
Archive Number: 10540
Size: 31 KB
Series Summary:
Hunted by memories, Ranma stumbles into the SDF-1 and finds himself
deeply involved in the First Robotech War.
Episode Summary:
Quick and to the point: Ranma vs Rick, Ranma vs Battlepods, Ranma vs
himself.
Review:
A good chapter, though there are typos. Diary not dairy. ^_^ And of cour'se you forgot to
use contractions. And some of the dialoue feels wooden. Other than that a pretty good
piece of work.
And don't worry about Glazius, he's a lot more stricter than me. ^_^ BTW, your prose
need some work, too. It needs to have a more natural flow. I just don't have the feel
of the work, you know.
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[Ranma 1/2 Mega-Crossover]
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Title: Dark Crucible
Episode: Episode 3: "Darkness in the Heavens"
Series: Ranma, KOR, El Hazard, others
Genre: Dark Mega Crossover
Author: Jitou
Email: jitou@geocities.com
Homepage: www.geocities.com/jitou.geo
Archived at www.geocities.com/jitou.geo/fanfic.htm
Date Sent to FFML: May 12, 2000
Archive Number: 10574
Size: 148 KB
Series Summary:
Standard evil beings attacking Tokyo. But this time everyone else is
taking a hand to stop 'em.
Episode Summary:
The crossovers join forces to defeat a powerful demon (among other
things).
Review:
Pretty nice action writing, though the chapter has that comic-book feel to it.
Anyway, the fic feels like, oh, the average throw the kitchen sink in mega-
crossover, though I have to wait for further chapters for the final verdict. Good
writing but as I said feels like a comic book.
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Title: Life and Times: First Knight
Episode: Chapter 5: The Strongest Woman
Series: Ranma 1/2, Yu Yu Hakusho, Street Fighter, and various others.
Genre: Crossover
Author: Donny Cheng
Email: chengdo@home.com
Homepage: http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Ginza/4537
Date Sent to FFML: May 9, 2000
Archive Number: 10362
Size: 20 KB
Series Summary:
The first arc of Ranma's immortal journey. This will eventually get to
that 'far in the future' being hinted at. ^_^;
Episode Summary:
Chun Li arrives at Genkai's temple. A tired Ranma rises up to the
challenge.
Review:
Immensely amusing, though I am a bit jaded by Ranma. Okay, to be honest,
I hate Ranma. I once liked it, but now I hate it. And Ranma fics have to be
extremely good to get a positive reaction from me. Frankly, I fell asleep. Though
I think that was from sleep deprivation.
Sorry, Donny. It is a nice chapter, and after I woke up I finished it straight. And it
has the same high quality of your other works. But Ranma for me is starting to
become really stale. Once again, sorry.
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[SailorMoon]
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Title: Fun With Minako!
Genre: Humor/lime
Author: Skyrocket
Email: skyrocket35@hotmail.com
Archived at http://www.fanfiction.net
Date Sent to FFML: May 9, 2000
Archive Number: 10347
Size: 29 KB
Summary:
Just a bit of ecchi fun. ;) Ami finds a post on the net that causes
outrage among the Senshi. To even things up with the otaku hordes, the
Sailors decided to riff the post MST3K-style. But they keep getting
distracted...
Review:
Two words: No comment.
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[SailorMoon / Gen13]
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Title: Moonlight Heroes
Episodes: 2-4
Genre: Xover
Author: Skyrocket
Email: skyrocket35@hotmail.com
Archived at http://www.fanfiction.net
Date Sent to FFML: May 1, 2000 (in 3 posts)
Archive Numbers: 10062, 10064, 10066, resp.
Size: totalling 64 KB
Series Summary:
Anime's favorite magical girls met comic's hippest teens. A call from
the past of John Lynch has brought the Gen13 kids to Japan. All they
want is a nice relaxing vacation. But unbeknownst to them, their
arrival in Tokyo has garnered the attention of the Negaverse.
Meanwhile, Raye is having bad dreams - dreams that end in the death of
the Sailor Scouts.
Episode Summary:
Gen13 hit the streets of Tokyo! But a dinner with their mentor's old
friend goes wrong and soon John Lynch is in the hospital in serious
condition. Unbeknownst to the young heroes, this is all part of a plan.
Malachite is scheming to get the Silver Imperium Crystal from Sailor
Moon, and he plans to use Gen13 to do it. It's Gen13 VS the Sailor
Scouts with the fate of the world as the prize.
Reviews:
Well, another pet peeve of mine. I hate Gen 13. And I also hate the NA dub. But, hey,
I'm not supposed to be biased and I do read everything... anyway, the fact still
remains that I'm kinda disinterested. Maybe it's the title, maybe it's the Gen 13,
maybe it's the name Malachite... well, the prose is fine though it still needs a bit of
polish. Your Brimstone Raising fic, IMHO, is better than this one. Sorry.
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[Slayers]
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Title: The Slayers: Reward Chapter 1: Surprise! The lovely bride?!
Genre: Continuation
Author: Lord Archive
Email: archive@mich.com
Homepage: http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Fuji/9061/anime.html
Date Sent to FFML: May 11, 2000
Archive Number: 10503
Size: 22 KB
Summary:
Lina gets into a little trouble with a dragon, and Gourry kills it for
her. But his reward for doing that is beyond what either of them had
expected and all because of an interfering priest.
Review:
A great first chapter for a Slayers fic, though your experience the Ranma fic genre
is slipping through. Pretty fun chapter with all the fun hijinks. Gonna watch out for this.
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[Sonic the Hedgehog]
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Title: Kenal's Story: On a Wing and a Tale
Author: Adrian Tymes
Email: wingcat@pacbell.net
Archived at http://www.franken.de/users/deco/stories/tymes.html
Date Sent to FFML: May 9, 2000
Archive Number: 10416
Size: 21 KB
Summary:
Just before Doomsday, a member of a race long thought dead comes to
Knothole. He appears to be just another refugee from Robotropolis with
a tale to tell. However, storytelling pales in comparison to the
newcomer's most important problem: can he avoid becoming dragon chow?
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Title: Kenal's Story: Prank-stice Makes Perfect
Author: Adrian Tymes
Email: wingcat@pacbell.net
Archived at http://www.franken.de/users/deco/stories/tymes.html
Date Sent to FFML: May 10, 2000
Archive Number: 10469
Size: 22 KB
Summary:
Attempted murder is the charge, and the griffins have found Knothole's
leader guilty. The King of the griffins comes to serve justice, while
Kenal tags along with his own plans.
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Title: Kenal's Story: Surprises
Author: Adrian Tymes
Email: wingcat@pacbell.net
Archived at http://www.franken.de/users/deco/stories/tymes.html
Date Sent to FFML: May 11, 2000
Archive Number: 10513
Size: 48 KB
Summary:
Kenal and company return with an offer the Freedom Fighters can't
refuse. It seems too good to be true, but nobody expects the ultimate
results.
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Title: Kenal's Story: The Crown's Curse
Author: Adrian Tymes
Email: wingcat@pacbell.net
Archived at http://www.franken.de/users/deco/stories/tymes.html
Date Sent to FFML: May 13, 2000
Archive Number: 10560
Size: 25 KB
Summary:
Grisha has what she wants: total control of Home. The only griffin
outside her grasp is the one with the crown. She sends Sandra to fetch
him, but he isn't all Sandra returns with.
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Title: Kenal's Story: Tails the Necromancer
Author: Adrian Tymes
Email: wingcat@pacbell.net
Archived at http://www.franken.de/users/deco/stories/tymes.html
Date Sent to FFML: May 13, 2000
Archive Number: 10584
Size: 19 KB
Summary:
Tails battles his magic for control of himself. If he loses, all life
on Mobius could be forfeit. Can Sonic stop his kitsune friend?
Mass review:
Okay, first of all, I'd like to give a Adrian Tymes a big thank you.
Everyone give the kid a big hand of applause.
He's the only writer of Sonic fics and you know he actually loves doing it.
Though there are a few typos and of course they're short, these fics capture
the show's flavor greatly. And they really brighten up my day by at least
breaking up the monotony of reading Ranma fics. ^_^
Anyway, keep up the good work!
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Anyway, another List review finished.
BTW, I heartily recommend Raye Johnson's FY fic Starlit Reflections.
The way she manages it, the fic is going to end up pretty beautifully,
but I'm guessing for a bitter-sweet ending for our heroine and hero.
And the fact that Raye seems to be pulling Tamahome's family away
from the massacre situation is a definite plus.
Anyway, see ya around! I'll be posting some fics as soon as I hook up
all three of the computers at home. And yes, Tobias, I'm getting around
to your stuff. Just let me rest my fingers. ^_-