Subject: [FFML] Re: [fanfic/background][SM][alt] A Very Scary Thought - SM Style
From: "DB Sommer" <sommer@3rdm.net>
Date: 5/20/2000, 1:55 PM
To: "Elsa Bibat" <aerolbj@i-next.net>
CC: <ffml@fanfic.com>

Elsa wrote:


Apologies to the guys who originally came up with AVST concept.
Just borrowing it.

After looking this over, I think you meant the Quantum Destinies resonator
concept.
(It's Jurai-Knight's, BTW)


Anyway, I am willing to continue this, but I need a co-writer more or
less,

Not me. I'm busier than all get out. My 'brief' lemon turned out to be over
50K. *Sigh* And now it seems I have less time than ever. At least I have
enough to C+C this.



     A lot of rabbits. Stuffed rabbits. Wallpaper with rabbits.
The blanket on the comfortable bed that covered a sleeping form
had rabbit figures aplenty.

This is going to be...bad. I can just feel it.


     �Rise and shine, Usagi-chan!!!!�,

I see she's taken the rabbit thing to the utmost.

     �Why you, little brat!� the blonde girl shouted at his

her

little brother, leaping out of the bed and was about to give the
bratty kid his just desserts when

desserts, when (I think)

a sharp voice intruded from
downstairs.

     �Haruka! Stop picking on your little brother! Get dressed,
you�ll be late!�

Haruka?! I guess I should have known.

     Shingo gave her

his

elder sister a red eye as she proceeded to
slammed

slam


     Haruka �Usagi-chan� Ten�ouh ate the toast in two quick
bites as she glance

glanced

at her watch. Ten more minutes. Okay, she
could do it. Home to Juuban High was five minutes if she pushed
herself. At her current speed she would be able to do it in
eight. Two minutes to spare.

Yeah, right. Practically begging for something to happen there.


     She was too

so

intent on looking at her watch that she didn�t
see the group of delinquents ganging up on a cat in her path.
Slamming into one of them she tumbled and crashed.

     �What the HELL?!� Haruka shouted from her prone position
from

on

the ground. Hearing no response, she painfully brought
herself to stand

stand up (sounds better to me)

and glared balefully at the stunned group of
delinquents.

     �It�s�it�s�Haruka!� one of the delinquents said, his voice
quavering.

"When danger reared her ugly head, the punks bravely turned their tails and
fled."
(with apologies to Monty Python)


     �AAAAAAAGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!� The mass of young men
tumbling

tumbled

over each other trying to get away as fast as they
could from the �Rabbit of Juuban High�.

     Unfortunately for them, Haruka heard one of them call her
that. Thus that was how four young delinquents were introduced
to the many ways how a school bag can be used to inflict pain.

Heh. It's bad. I've found out the hard way.



     A ragged-looking black cat who had obviously seen better
times.

Better than a ragged-looking orange one that goes 'Ack!" all the time.
(BTW: Has anyone tried to make Bill the Cat into a mooncat? Hey, if he
could run for president...


     �You know if you keep on beating guys up like that, you
won�t get a boyfriend,� the red-haired teen teasingly said to
her seatmate.

     �Most boys are idiots. And if they aren�t idiots, they�re
like Umino over there,� Haruka said,

"A real sex machine." She gave a seductive lick with her tongue.


     �Okay, class,� the rather frazzled homeroom teacher for
class 2-1 said as pulled out a sheaf of papers from her bag.
�Hope you�re ready for this test.�

     �Oh, shit!�

     �Ten�ou-san, I�ll take that as a �no�,� Haruna-sensei said
with a pained look on her face.

Heh. Very cute

     �Motoki-kun! The game cheats!�

Isn't that always the excuse for losing? ^_^


     �Now, now, Haruka. The fact that you didn�t win doesn�t
mean that the game cheats,� Motoki said with a light chuckle.

     �Yes it does. I always win in this sort of thing,� Haruka
said with a smirk.

Of course you do, dear. :)

     The red failing mark was quite prominent on the upper
right hand corner.

Teachers always do that. I think it's genetic.


     �Hey! Watch we�re you�re going!�

     �I should say the same to you, idiot!� Haruka answered
with a huff.

Obviously they are meant to be with one another.

     �Me!? An idiot!?! Better look at yourself first, girl,�
the handsome man said as he picked up Haruka�s test paper, which
had fallen to the ground when they had bumped into each other.
�You better study more before you start calling people idiots,
little girl.�

heh


     And that was how Mamoru Chiba got introduced to Haruka
Ten�ou. And how he learned the amount of pain a book bag can
deliver when in the right hands.

Heh


     As she opened the window to check on where the sound was
coming from a

from, a

small black figure jumped into her room. She
looked down and saw the cat she had seen

I'd say 'encountered' since you used 'saw' earlier in the sentence




     �You mean Moon Prism Power?�

     After an incredible shower of light and a really cool
transformation sequence with violins and pianos playing in the
background, Sailor Moon walked the earth for the first time.

So does this mean the real Usagi will be boffing Michiru? ^_^


       �Take your tiara and say the words �Moon Tiara Action�
while throwing it. That should be enough to take the youma
down.�

"From what? Laughing?" Haruka asked.


     She stretched a bit, yawning a little to get the kinks
out, when she noticed something. There was something

I'd say 'an object' instead of 'something' since that's the last word of
the prevous sentence.

Cute work.

D.B. Sommer




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