Jitou
Yikes! There were some things that I overlooked but I wanted to
correct! At any rate, here they are (and there are mercifully short).
"A sword is a deadly weapon," Kenshin said.
"Fighting techniques are what perfect killers."
"This will always be true."
"But this servant prefers what Inaho's family believes to
that truth."
"You will not harm Inaho-dono. This shall be, upon the
pact of blood!" (de gozaru yo! ^_^)
I think you should combine these phrases. To chop up the dramatic
speech, though it works in the manga (and in the anime)--and it works
because of the pictures--detracts from the intensity/vividness of this
scene.
the time he was still in the land of nippon.
Capitalize "Nippon."
B.Na