I was very tired when I wrote this.
I AM NOT TO BE BLAMED! It'snot my
fault!
...
Okay, maybe it is, but... *sigh*
Don't be silly! :) Nothing in this world is ever anyone's fault--it's
always (::dun, dun, DUN!!::) Erin's fault! ::points a finger::
"Yeah. Personally I don't see what's so great about an armed style. I
guess it's
the principal of things, getting all styles recorded, and improved
upon. But
nevermind that. How're you been doing, in this big city of yours?"
Never mind should be two words, shouldn't it? Then, if you took "How're"
apart, the sentence would read, "How are you been doing ..." and that just
strikes me as: You were tired. You made a simple mistake (I do it all
the time), so maybe you should change it to either, "How're you doing?" or
"How've you been doing?" Depends on what you want. :)
"Oh, it's been like that ever since I had to help one of the Dragon
Prince's
ancestors. You remember Herb, right? He's all scaly nowadays. Anyways, I
hadta
drink this potion made out of a dragon pearl. Made me lotsa tougher, but
my
hair's been like that ever since. The color too. Not that I mind
white. but
the pink stripe is kinda embarrassing.
Hee hee. Pink's my favorite color, you aquatranssexual, you! :p
"True. Still, no-one deserved to die like that, not even him. Still,
at least I learned the Raijinken."
No one hasn't been connected with a hyphen in any of the published books
I've ever read, but I may be wrong. ^^; The world's a big place...
"She can't leave the valley, you know that. It was the price we... she
had
to
pay. Why don't you come see us instead"
Need some punctuation after instead? <:)
Nibun