hi! Just wanted to say that this was a great story! I have
always had a weakness for space dramas like robotech and
wing commander, so something like this fic just seemed
tailor made for me. The only problem i had was the magic
aspects which were thrown in, i have always preferred that
magic and science types be kept apart. Of course, that is
only my bias, especially considering that i know next to
nothing about rifts.
All in all, a good work, although it is a bit rushed in some
places and there were some minor grammar and spelling
errors, nothing that a quick proof-read can't fix. CAn't
wait to see the next one though, good luck! stay safe and
God Bless.
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