DB Sommer wrote:
Ah, another not too long one:
Yeah, not as verbose as some people I might mention :P
This is part of my Life and Times crossover series. This is the fifth
chapter to the First Knight arc.
L+T, the fic that never ends. ^_^
It'll end. I just won't live long enough to see it.
C & C welcomed.
First Knight 5: The Strongest Woman
"Stupid Old Ghoul," Ranma mumbled under his breath.
"Another hour," Genkai commanded,
Oops. Forgot who Ranma was training with, it's been so long. You might want
to consider a forward at the start to refresh out memories as to what
happened last chapter. No need to put it on your page, since all the
chapters will be next to one another, but here it would be most useful.
Will remember the next time I post a chapter. *Marks down on calender:
May 9, 2001*
Ranma complained, but he did not stop the training. His
finger was seriously starting to go numb on him.
"Then your father did a good job.
Heh. About the only time you'll hear anyone say something nice about Genny.
I say nice things about him all the time ^_^
He was
going to feel great and forget the soreness of his arm
You said 'arms' earlier. Which is it?
Should be just one arm, since he's balancing on a finger.
Chun Li panted
Just like her fan-boys would do around her.
Don't know what you mean
*pant*
hands and tried dispelling the nightmares away with sheer force of
will. However, it was not enough to prepare her for the final image of
Vega's face looming over her, nor the feeling of his lips pressed
against hers or her ardent response to it.
Shoot. When one is only familiar with the SF V series, it's hard to
reconcile some images. :)
Hehe, loved evil Chun Li.
with a plain face that
was comically serious
'comically serious'? Is that an oxymoron?
Yes, meant to be :P
"Hello, my name Is Chun Li. Is this the residence of one Saotome
Ranma? I want to have a match with him."
Ranma: I don't need no girls trying to match up with me since I already got
half the chicks in universe lusting after me, or will eventually.
Only half? ^_^;;
any time and while he was momentarily stopped, she flipped onto her
hands and pushed off the ground, immediately twisting her legs. The
spinning her legs sliced into his stomach and he was forced to retreat
back a few steps.
just like a video game. :)
Well, the entire match was an imagined fight on a 2d screen with the
occasional 'dodge' into the back ground :P
been smart, he was beginning to tell. She was a lot more robust than
he had at first given her credit for.
Especially with the way she jiggled when she leapt in the air.
Oh, you don't mean that sort of 'robust'. Sorry.
Uh, yeah, I didn't mean that at all, lalala...
even a miniscule
amount left to spend after this morning's training. It might not even
be enough to form a small poof
'pool' perhaps?
Mean 'poof' as in puff of smoke type thing. Prolly not the best word
choice ^_^;
"Yes, yes," Ranma answered, finally, sinking back onto the bed
and felt Mini-Urd cuddle beside him despite being angry with him
apparently. He avoided Mini-Moiraine's gaze, knowing how angry she
might be with him. He could just imagine how much he was stunting her
growth with only enough chi to live.
Having the three chibi's of them is just disturbing somehow.
Sucker for SD cuteness, main reason they were made ^_^;
The End. (maybe)
Yeah. Right. Not this one.
Hard habit to break and it lets people know it's me ^_^
Good work. Lot of little errors, but overall it flowed well.
Lots of errors actually, and thanks for catching a lot of them.
D.B. Sommer