>On the whole this looks like
>fun - the textbook way of writing a first chapter that engages
>the reader's interest and piques their curiosity. A few graphics
>as teasers as well but haven't gotten round to them yet.

Textbook? Er... darn.

There's a textbook on writing first episodes???
Where can I find this holy grail of bad fanfic writers?!
Gods know I need it!

Um... incidentally, for everyone who's wondering who Rei is
supposed to be emulating (kinda) there's two big clues. Look
at the blue-haired Rei on the left. Now look at her chest,
and remember what Asuka always used to call Rei in the original
series. Not 'doll'. The other sarcastic name. Clear? Okay.

AAAAARRGGGH! *Runs from horrible, horrible joke* ^_^

Haven't yet seen the pics, but I really hope you've given her those funky gold bracelets ^_^

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