At 09:40 AM 5/11/00 EST, Adrian Forest wrote:
On the whole this looks like
fun - the textbook way of writing a first chapter that engages
the reader's interest and piques their curiosity. A few graphics
as teasers as well but haven't gotten round to them yet.
Textbook? Er... darn.
There's a textbook on writing first episodes???
Where can I find this holy grail of bad fanfic writers?!
Gods know I need it!
That's what surprised me. I didn't even know there
was a textbook. ^^;
Um... incidentally, for everyone who's wondering who Rei is
supposed to be emulating (kinda) there's two big clues. Look
at the blue-haired Rei on the left. Now look at her chest,
and remember what Asuka always used to call Rei in the original
series. Not 'doll'. The other sarcastic name. Clear? Okay.
AAAAARRGGGH! *Runs from horrible, horrible joke* ^_^
Heh. Another victim who got it.
Haven't yet seen the pics, but I really hope you've given her those funky
gold bracelets ^_^
Maybe next pic. ^_^
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