Subject: [FFML] [Eva] [Fic] Second Chances - Prologue
From: "Dokushinsha" <dokushin@uclink4.berkeley.edu>
Date: 5/7/2000, 4:56 AM
To: "FFML" <ffml@fanfic.com>


Disclaimer: Neon Genesis Evangelion is not mine.  It's owned by 
Hideaki Anno, Studio Gainax, and a handful of other companies.  
I'd be crazy to try to make profit off of this and if I'm found 
doing so, may I be tarred and feathered like the base criminal I 
am!

 Looking over the great expanse of blood red liquid, sits a 
young child.  Completely devoid of emotion, he gazes at the half-
head.  "Ayanami... Asuka... Misato-san..."
 "Is this what I wanted?  Peace.  No burdens, no 
expectations."
 "Yes.  No one to berate me, to annoy me, to anger me, to 
frighten me...  no one."
 Shinji sighs imperceptibly, showing his first sign of 
emotion.  "Alone at last."
 As he lies down on the pearl white surface of the cross, he 
whispers one final word.
 "Alone."

---

Bored Otaku Productions presents:
Second Chances - Prologue
By Dokushinsha

---

 As the days pass on and he is left with nothing to do, 
Shinji thoughts turn to what has occurred since he arrived in 
Tokyo-3.  Thinking back to the first time he met Misato, and how 
she opened her home to him, Shinji furrows his brow in thought.  
"Why?"  Sympathy?  Pity?  Maternal instincts?  ...  Love?  "No, 
pity, or maybe even sympathy."  But was there more?  Her kiss.  
Protecting him from harm.  Congratulating him after defeating an 
Angel.  Crying for him when his body failed to rematerialize.  
Anger when he ran away.  Forcing him to pilot EVA-01.  Teasing 
him.  Smiling.  Sadness.  Fear.  Loneliness.  Happiness.  
Laughter.
 Whispering softly to himself, Shinji pleads, "No, she's 
gone.  Please, I don't want to remember."
 Closing his eyes, Shinji drifts back into a restless 
slumber.

---

 Inevitably, Shinji's thoughts return to his past.  Asuka.  
His first meeting with her.  Her arrogance.  How she criticized 
him, teased him, made fun of him.  Being forced to live with her.  
How she criticized him, teased him, made fun of him.  Being 
forced to go to the same school as her.  How she criticized him, 
teased him, made fun of him.  Being forced to pilot with her.  
How she criticized him, teased him, made fun of him.  Being 
forced to care for her.  How she criticized him, teased him, made 
fun of him.  Being forced to see her pain, her tears.  How she 
criticized him, teased him, made fun of him.  
 No, his mind cries.  There's more than that!  The first few 
moments of their kiss.  The exhilaration, if only for a second, 
as they synchronized perfectly.  The rare smile she graced him 
with.  The vulnerability she showed when she thought no one was 
looking.  Her confidence, the fire that burned within, the fire 
she used to destroy the Angels.  Her laughter as she talked with 
Hikari.  Her smile when she looked at him, her laughter when she 
talked with him.  Her smile looking, her laughter talking.  Her 
smile, her laughter.  Her smile, her laughter.  Smile, laughter.  
Smile, laughter.  Smile, laughter...
 "NO!!!"  A single tear falls slowly down Shinji's face, 
down from his eyes, past the side of his nose, onto his lips, and 
splashes gently onto the white cross.  "No, she's gone.  Please, 
I don't want to remember."
 With a shuddering sigh, Shinji lies back down and allows 
sleep to overtake him.

---

 "Ayanami," Shinji whispers almost inaudibly.
 Images flood Shinji's mind as he thinks about Rei.  Sitting 
by the window, staring outside the classroom.  Loneliness.  His 
eyes follow her hand as it slowly comes up towards his face, and 
slaps him.  Surprise.  Tripping and falling onto her.  
Embarrassment.  Wrenching open the entry's plug's hatch, then 
seeing her smile at him for the first time.  Relief.  Seeing her 
stare blankly back at him, with no sense of recognition.  Pain, 
cold as ice.  Cradling her in his arms as she winces in pain.  
Concern.  His bloody hand.  Fear, concern, ... care?  Waiting for 
Touji's EVA-03, hearing her scream of surprise then pain, then 
hearing Maya's words.  "Unit 00 is severely damaged.  The pilot 
is wounded."  Fear, concern, ... care.  Watching as the energy 
beam eats through the shield and impacts EVA-00.  Fear, concern, 
and care.  
 But there is more than that.  Companionship when they 
silently ate lunch together.  Peace as he sat in class staring at 
her.  Contentment during the few times they walked to school 
together.  Happiness when she spoke with him.  Warmth when she 
smiled at him.  
 Tears that he can no longer contain begin falling.  "No, 
she's gone.  Please, I don't want to remember."
 "Ayanami."
 Not bothering to wipe his tears away, Shinji collapses into 
a fetal position and cries himself to sleep, whispering a phrase 
over and over.
 "I miss you all.  I miss you all.  I miss you all.  I miss 
you all..."

---

 Yawning slightly, Shinji cracks one eyelid open and jumps 
back in surprise, both eyes wide open.  Floating above the sea of 
red is a woman glowing with an almost painful luminescence.  
"Ohayo, Ikari Shinji."  
 Blinking in surprise, Shinji is speechless.  "B..b...boku-
wa...? (You are...?)"
 Smiling peacefully, the woman replies, "I am Belldandy, 
Shinji-kun."
 "But... how can you be here?  Instrumentality has occurred.  
I should be the only person left."
 "I am not a child of Lilith like you, Shinji.  I am an 
Angel."
 Shinji backs away, his eyes widening in fear.  "A..angel?!"
 "No Shinji, not like those you fought.  I am here because 
of what you have learned, these past few days."
 "What I've learned?"
 "Hai.  You are starting to understand your own feelings for 
the first time in your life.  It might have taken Instrumentality 
for you to understand, but regardless, you are learning."
 "But I still don't understand!  What have I learned?"
 Seemingly ignoring his question, Belldandy responds with 
another.  "Shinji-kun, why did you choose the Instrumentality?  
Why choose to open the door to Gaf's room, to have everyone's 
souls joined, instead of existing separately?"
 "I...I don't know.  Please, don't ask such questions.  I 
don't want to have to think about it, to remember those times.  
Please."
 Nodding slightly, Belldandy replied, "Very well, Shinji-
kun," and disappears without a whisper.
 Blinking once in surprise, Shinji sighs to himself.  "What 
is going on?  Please, I just want to forget."  As his thoughts 
once again return to Rei, Asuka, and Misato, Shinji reluctantly 
falls asleep.

---

 Following days of introspection and soul-searching, Shinji 
is at a loss for what to do next.  "Why am I here?  Why haven't I 
joined everyone else?  Am I to be alone forever?" he asks 
himself.
 A voice (his own, he realizes) whispers back at him, 
"Alone..."
 "Forever."
 "Alone forever......"
 "Alone forever."
 His eyes widening slightly in fear, Shinji quietly whispers 
back, "No."
 "No?" the voice responds.  "But that's what you chose; to 
avoid piloting EVA-01 again, to avoid Asuka's teasing, to avoid 
your Father's demands, to avoid the guilt you feel towards Touji, 
to avoid Rei's indifference, to avoid Misato-san's pain, to avoid 
everything."
 Shoulders slumped, Shinji despondently responds, "Yes, 
that's right.  It's easier this way.  No pain, no sorrow, no 
regrets, ... nothing."  Closing his eyes, Shinji's fights back 
the loneliness and fear he feels in his heart, for now.

---

"Shinji-kun... Shinji-kun..."
 Shinji slowly opens his eyes and finds Belldandy kneeling 
off to his right.  "Belldandy!"
 "Ohayo, Shinji-kun.  How are you feeling?"
 "..."
 "Shinji-kun?"
 "Feeling?  I ... I don't know.  Fine, I guess.  Why are you 
here, Belldandy?"
 "Shinji-kun, why did you choose Instrumentality?"
 Wincing almost in pain, Shinji replies, "Why do you ask me 
these questions?  I ... it hurts to think about these matters."
 "I'm sorry.  Would you like me to leave?"
 Looking up in fear, Shinji exclaims, "NO!  Please stay, 
I'm..."
 Shinji drops his head back down between his knees, 
whispering, "lonely."
 "But Shinji-kun, isn't this what you wanted?  To be alone?  
To avoid everyone and everything that caused you pain?"
 "Yes, but..."
 "But?"
 "Maybe... maybe I was wrong.  I thought this would be 
better, locking myself away from everyone.  Then I wouldn't have 
to face them, and try to live up to their expectations.  I 
wouldn't have to worry about how they felt towards me.  I 
wouldn't have to ... disappoint anyone."
 "And how do you feel now, Shinji-kun?"
 "I don't know.  I'm scared to say what I think."  As Shinji 
slowly looks up at Belldandy, he whispers softly, "What if I was 
wrong?"
 Placing her hand gently on his cheek, Belldandy replies, 
"Then you were wrong.  All that matters is that you realize this.  
Can you answer my questions now, Shinji-kun?  Why did you choose 
the Instrumentality?  Why choose to open the door to Gaf's room, 
to have everyone's souls joined, instead of existing separately?"
 His eyes screwed tight in concentration, fear, and anger, 
Shinji replies.  "I ran away again.  I didn't want to suffer 
anymore.  I was scared of what would happen if I didn't allow the 
Instrumentality to occur.  I was scared I would have to pilot 
EVA-01 again.  I was scared..."
 Shinji slowly looks up, gazing into Belldandy's eyes with 
surprisingly fierce determination.  "But I'm even more frightened 
now!  I... I don't want to be alone anymore.  I can't imagine an 
eternity like this!"  To himself, he whispers, "I'd rather die."
 As she strokes his cheek gently, calming him down, 
Belldandy smiles lightly.  "Then you will have your wish.  In 
these past few days He has seen your regret.  He is giving you a 
second chance, Shinji-kun.  Will you accept it?"
 Shinji looks up with hope.  "A second chance?  I can see 
everyone again?  Ayanami, Asuka, and Misato-san?"
 "No, Shinji-kun.  Not them, not then.  Only a second 
chance.  Do you accept?"
 Shinji is almost in tears.  "But why...?  I won't be able 
to see them?"  Shinji withdraws into himself, filled with 
disappointment.  "...Fine.  I accept.  Anything to leave this 
place, Belldandy.  I accept."
 "Then it will be so.  Remember, use this opportunity 
wisely, Shinji-kun.  Don't forget what you have learned here.  
Now close your eyes and let all your worries go.  Trust me."
 Shinji slowly closed his eyes and exhales loudly as 
Belldandy leans over to him, and kisses him gently on the 
forehead.  "You have your wish, Shinji-kun."
 As a bright light suddenly flares outward from the two, 
Shinji whispers softly, "Arigatou."

---

 "Sensei, sensei!!"
 Shinji slowly opens his eyes, and jumps back in alarm as a 
young child's face appears directly in front of him.  "Aaah!!"
 "I scared you didn't I, sensei?  I'm sorry ... Sensei, are you 
ok?  Sensei?"
 Shinji hasn't responded, since the boy looks exactly like 
he did almost ten years ago.  "Masaka!  (It's unbelievable!)  Who 
are you?!"
 "Sensei, what's wrong?  It's me, Shinji."
 "But, but..."  As Shinji-sensei draws a hand to his face, 
unable to believe his eyes, he is shocked to see how old and 
wrinkled his hand looks.  *What has happened to me?*
 Chibi-Shinji looks on in confusion, unable to understand 
his sensei's reaction.  He tries to make sense of it all and 
comes to an unsettling conclusion.  "Sensei, you're not sick like 
Mother, are you?  You're not going to die like her, are you?"  
Chibi-Shinji begins sniffing sadly.
 Forced to put aside his problems for the moment, 
Shinji-sensei is faced with a crying, four-year old child.  "No, 
Shinji, I'm ok.  Don't worry."  Pulling up a chair, he lifts 
Chibi-Shinji into his arms and cradles him gently.  "I'm ok..."


To Be Continued...

---

Author's notes:

I have mixed feelings about this, my first posted work.  It's 
highly introspective on Shinji's part, and I'm not entirely sure 
I got his character right.  Plus I'm starting to think it was too 
wordy.  Anyway, I was lucky enough to see all of NGE (eps and 
movies), so at least I have the canon to work off of.  Also, I 
think the concept has promise.  I just hope I write well enough 
to do it justice.

I took a few liberties with the storyline.  I'm not quite sure 
how exactly Shinji chooses to allow the Instrumentality to occur, 
or even if that's its name.  Should I end the prologue right 
after Shinji and Belldandy part company?  How old was Shinji when 
his mother "died"?

Corrections and input would be appreciated.  Even a simple "I 
liked/hated it" will suffice (but isn't preferable).  I'm 
tentatively looking for pre-readers as well, so if you'd like 
such a position, please say so.  Barring death threats and such, 
I'm going to continue this as far as possible.  So I promise not 
to release 2 chapters and disappear. :)

For those who do recognize my nickname, Dokushinsha, send me an 
email.  I've been off of the FFML for quite a while, and I'd like 
to see who's still around.

Dokushinsha 
http://www.freeyellow.com/members5/dokushinsha/index.html
dokushin@uclink4.berkeley.edu (primary address)
dokushinsha@juno.com (secondary address)






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