Hiya kiddies!
For those who've been missing this or expecting this, well,
here it is. It took me some time, but hey, give me a break
you guys and gals are sending more and more of this stuff
weekly. It takes me thirty hours to go through the stories again
to refresh my memory and construct non-offensive constructive
criticism. ^_^ Anyway, here it is.
As always the opinions are mine and all responsibility goes to
me.
The FFML Synopses List
======================
For the week of: April 28, 2000
Moderator on Duty: Nikholas "Switch" F. Toledo
Synopses Submitted: 28 (4 for April 29)
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[Gundam]
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Title: Heroes Who Shed Their Blood
Series: Gundam (One Year War era)
Genre: Drama
Author: Andrew Dynon
Email: ajdynon@students.latrobe.edu.au
Date Sent to FFML: April 25, 2000
Archive Number: 9740
Size: 12 KB
Summary:
The Federation commanders launch an attack on what they think is a
lightly-defended shoal zone. The grunts find out exactly how wrong the
brass were.
Review:
Well, first, the fic has the feeling of being rushed. It could have been better. But still
we must keep in mind that Mr. Dynon was working on a deadline. Anyway, the
main concept is good, but the approach and delivery could have gone better.
I advise a revision. A big one. Rewrite with details and more polish and this fic
could stand on it's own, even without a dedication to a particular holiday.
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[Here is Greenwood]
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Title: Extended Play
Segment: track twenty-one
Genre: altiverse/original flavor
Author: Ukyou Kuonji
Email: ukyoukwnji@aol.com
Homepage:
<http://members.aol.com/ukyoukwnji/index.htm>http://members.aol.com/ukyoukwn
ji/index.htm
Archived at
<http://members.tripod.com/~tina97/fics/explay01.html>http://members.tripod.
com/~tina97/fics/explay01.html
Date Sent to FFML: April 26, 2000
Archive Number: 9843
Size: 18 KB
Series Summary:
Life at Ryokuto Academy is a little different in this re-telling of the
Greenwood saga by Shun Kisaragi. It so happens that Shun's roommate,
Kazuya Hasukawa, hasn't figured out that Shun really is a guy...
Segment Summary:
While Suka-chan continues to sleep off the effects of a rather ill-
considered brewski, chaos is raging at Ryokurin Hall due to a blackout
as folks are scambling to get themselves situated after summer holidays.
A few things are discovered in the hall that shouldn't be there, and a
thing or two that Shun hadn't expected to run across...
Review:
Once again a magnificent chapter of this *the* Greenwood fic in all of fanfiction.
It is well-written and in a style I approve of. A must-read for both fans and non-fans.
Sad to say, that this seems to be the last chapter for awhile since Ukyou-chan
will have to translate the manga first before continuing. Anyway, good luck and
keep up the good work!
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[Magic Knight Rayearth / Ranma 1/2]
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Title: A Duet of Pigtails
Segment: Part Eight: Meanwhile.... (section one of two)
Genre: Hell if I know....
Author: Libby Thomas (with a li'l help from a friend)
Email: aduetofpigtails@cephiro.com
Homepage: http://yogipigs.megami.net/Duet/
Date Sent to FFML: April 25, 2000
Archive Number: 9774
Size: 140 KB
Series Summary:
The further adventu....ah, you get the drill already. ^_^
Segment Summary:
The battle comes to Earth as a team of Vanden Plaz are sent to capture
the children of Saotomes Ranma and Hikaru. Under the care of their aunt
Kasumi, there is little chance of survival for the group. Or is there?
To be continued in two weeks.
Review:
As I mentioned in an earlier essay, Libby Thomas is currently top dog on
the Innocent Civilian/Nice People Body Count list, beating out dozens of
other bloodthirsty authors out there! Congratulations! ^_^
Anyway another action packed chapter of A Duet of Pigtails, another fic
I both love and hate. Anyway, Libby have you been taking lessons from
Rob Barba, your teammate in Studio Yogipigs? There is a distinct TOS-
feel to most of ADoP and it is definitely gettting stronger. And that's good.
A very action packed writing style fit for a good comic book keeping the
flow of the story going with probably some of the most awesome fight
scenes in the history of fanfiction. That's why this babies a must read, folks!
Go read it now!
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[Mega-crossover]
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Title: FFN: FanFiction News Network
Segment: Broadcast 4: Just Another Day
Series: Many
Genre: Multi/NewsFic
Author: Jason McClaskey
Email: af776@acorn.net
Homepage: <http://www2.acorn.net/~af776>http://www2.acorn.net/~af776/
Date Sent to FFML: April 19, 2000
Archive Number: 9468
Size: 7 KB
Series Summary:
Based in downtown Tokyo, the FFN reports on the news in any and all
manga/anime universes set in the greater city area. Led by the
3 o'clock news with Akane Tendo and Ryoga Hibiki. Also features
commercials, fanfic reports, and various other programming...
Segment Summary:
Some commercials, a bit of news, Serena the weathergirl, the mentions of
a heinous plot, and the usual bit of senseless news broadcasting I write :)
Review:
Okay, comedic short. Kind like a skit. Made me faintly smile.
Next fic.
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Title: Republic of Desire
Segment: Part three: START THE RIOT! Or ABOUT TIME WE FOUND OUT SOMETHING!
Series: Original / Megacrossover / Ranma
Genre: Autobiography / Humour
Author: Subi
Email: subi@mono211.com, subi@gameart.com
Homepage: <http://www.gameart.com/4ca>http://www.gameart.com/4ca
Archived at
<http://www.gameart.com/4ca/rod/rodff03.txt>http://www.gameart.com/4ca/rod/r
odff03.txt
Date Sent to FFML: April 25, 2000
Archive Number: 9777
Size: 33 KB
Series Summary:
The story of my life... I was eight, living with the parents in a
village that had been transported brick-by-brick from its original
position in middle England to just outside Tokyo. My father worked for
the Japanese government, fooling visiting foreigners about the true
nature of the product of the vast silicon chip mines. One day a girl
called Tuzi turned up and claimed to be my sister. Somehow, everyone
believed her, even my parents, despite the markings on her face and the
rabbit ears. But _I_ knew, oh yes.
Segment Summary:
In which we learn of the unspeakable habits of schoolteachers, Ranma
gets the shock of his life, the foulness of sprouts is discussed and the
author's lack of cycling talent is demonstrated.
Note:
Synopses for the earlier segments were submitted, but these fics were
posted before a month hence, and so will not be included. For reference,
the earlier posts were sent on January 19 and February 21, 2000.
Review:
Young man, you do know drugs are illegal, right?
Just asking! ^_^
Pretty funny at parts, though you probably have to be insane as I am to enjoy the
humor. Anyway, this has inspired me to write my own autobiography! ^_^
So watch out as the story how I became the Lady of Pain and Mistress of Blades
as I battled through hordes of samurai, demons, Kasumis and a dozen other
things! ^_^
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[Neon Genesis Evangelion]
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Title: Gratuitous Theater
Segment: Two Hearts of One Mind - TimeRunner Reprise
Genre: WAFF
Author: TimeRunner
Email: keiichi@i-manila.com.ph
Homepage:
<http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Towers/7482>http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/T
owers/7482
Date Sent to FFML: April 27, 2000
Archive Number: 9839
Size: 9839
Series Summary:
The Gratuitous Theater Project is the collective term for an anthology
of reprised fanfics written by different authors. It's an writing
experiment, designed to highlight the differences in writing style
between the writers involved. Different fanfics from different authors
will be rewritten in the style of the assigned author.
Segment Summary:
One of Scriviner's most well-known and well-read fanfics is retold in
the dialogue-intensive style of TimeRunner, who places his own spin on
the story.
Review:
The first statement that comes to mind is ... well... "Don't fix what ain't
broken."
Also the fic demonstrates why a piece of fiction can be only actually done
by one person and is unique.
Not that I'm knocking the boys, Timerunner and Scriviner, for their ambitious
project but still, you have to admit, what came out was radically different
from the original.
Anyway, the work can stand on its own though I sometime say WTF. Just
read it and judge for yourselves.
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[No Need for Tenchi!]
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Title: Kiyone Muyo! Season 2: Home Life and Shadow Plays
Segment: Episode 2: No Need for Cameos
Genre: Romance (series as a whole is Action/Adventure)
Author: Thrythlind Hardwulf
Email: Thrythlind@aol.com
Homepage:
<http://members.aol.com/thrythlind/snake.html>http://members.aol.com/thrythl
ind/snake.html
Archived at
<http://members.aol.com/lycanskord/aku.html>http://members.aol.com/lycanskor
d/aku.html
Date Sent to FFML: April 22, 2000
Archive Number: 9641
Size: 17 KB
Series Summary:
Ryoko's past makes itself known, and the consequences must be weathered.
Segment Summary:
Ayeka gets tired of dealing with Ryoko's over-protectiveness, Tenchi's
guilt. She takes a trip with Ryo-Ohki into the Nerima district and
discusses her problems with two girls whose love problems could make
hers look simple. (The Nerima crew makes an appearance for a sentence
or two much later, but otherwise no more cameos)
Review:
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[Original Fiction]
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Title: The Adventures of Macho Caballo Part 2
Segment: Chapter 36, First Steps are Terrifying and Unremarkable
Genre: Drama/Humor
Author: James and the Bluejay
Email: jeeades@wanderway.com
Homepage: <http://www.wanderway.com/>http://www.wanderway.com
Archived at
<http://www.wanderway.com/macho/macho.htm>http://www.wanderway.com/macho/mac
ho.htm
Date Sent to FFML: April 25, 2000
Archive Number: 9818
Size: 41 KB
Series Summary:
A Ranmaesque curse befalls a lad in a different land, in a different
century. Ramon Caballo, known to his friends as 'Macho', falls into
sacred hot springs and now turns into a girl when splashed with hot
water. Accompanied by his friends, he has gone into the frontier to
find a sister who was raised by Apaches.
Segment Summary:
Will's capture brings Mexican soldiers to 'rescue' him; Sinestro starts
his move on the de Muerte rancho; Espuma marshals his arsenal of
weapons; Ramon gets instructions from an unlikely source; and Angie
decides to fight for Lonesome.
Review:
Well, another excellent chapter of what is probably one of the longest running
original series on the 'net right now. As always up to the quality of the series.
A must read if you wanna take a break from the standard Ranma fanfic.
Keep up the good work!
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[Ranma 1/2]
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Title: The Amazon and the Moneylender
Segment: Episode 11, Part 2: Kodachi and Mousse, devil-hunters?
Genre: Romance/Action
Author: Thrythlind Hardwulf
Email: Thrythlind@aol.com
Homepage:
<http://members.aol.com/thrythlind/snake.html>http://members.aol.com/thrythl
ind/snake.html
Archived at
<http://members.aol.com/lycanskord/aatm.html>http://members.aol.com/lycansko
rd/aatm.html
Date Sent to FFML: April 19, 2000
Archive Number: 9487
Size: 18 KB
Series Summary:
A rather serious fan fic about Shampoo hiring Nabiki to get certain
people out of her way, and the relationship budding between the two.
Segment Summary:
Kodachi and Mousse take on the oni, Kasumi and Nabiki continue to be at
odds. The author starts to wonder if he should be on medication.
Review:
Yes. You should be on medication. Now calm down and take a deep
breath and reorganize your thoughts as you try to give the story a semblance
of control. ^_^
Or maybe it's just me being jaded from too much Ranma fics. Anyway, a
pretty average fic witha fe amusing concepts.
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Title: An Awakening of Demons
Segment: Chapter 10 - Sleeping Dragons
Genre: Action/Thriller
Author: Kagami
Email: kagami@jeack.com.au
Homepage:
<http://www.csus.edu/indiv/s/seifertv/kagami>http://www.csus.edu/indiv/s/sei
fertv/kagami/
Date Sent to FFML: April 28, 2000
Archive Number: 9884
Size: 40 KB
Series Summary:
Ranma Saotome - your friendly neighbourhood half-demon? Kodachi Kuno -
Devil Hunter of the Kuno Clan? Nodoka Saotome - past lover of a Demon
Lord? Tempted to do a boggle of disbelief? No need; just read An
Awakening of Demons - where the past is always bad news and history
returns to haunt the living.
Segment Summary:
After an unorthodox landing on the island, Ranma and the Nerima gang
finally come face-to-face with the ally they seek - Seiryu, the Blue
Dragon of the East. Or is it? Ranma challenges the mysterious girl
they find to a duel - winner take all.
Review:
Hooyah! Another execellent chapter of what is currently one of the better
Ranma fanfics out there. Up to standards as always and Kagami is keeping
the pressure and action up!
A must read.
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Title: Childhood of a Modern Dynasty
Segment: Chapter 32: The Storm's End; Reunions and Good-byes
Genre: Continuation (lime)
Author: Jim Lazar
Email: jimlazar@earthlink.net
Homepage:
<http://home.earthlink.net/~jimlazar/anime>http://home.earthlink.net/~jimlaz
ar/anime
Date Sent to FFML: April 28, 2000
Archive Number: 9917
Size: 83 KB
Series Summary:
A series chronicling sixty years of Akane Tendo's life.
Some happy moments and some sad. Akane and Ranma love each other, but
is that enough to keep them together? Will James Davidson ever finish
the book on Akane's life he is writing? Not if his fiancee, Hanaki Ono,
keeps distracting him.
Segment Summary:
Reunions can be happy or sad. And sometimes both. The survivors of
1999 grieve over those who didn't make it though the Blackness.
Unfortunately, the Buyierfei aren't done causing pain yet, as Hanaki is
about to find out.
Review:
One of the bigger Ranma sagas I've ever read and possibly one of the better ones.
Another runner up for the Innocent Civilians/Nice Characters Body Count list, Jim
here has produced another fine chapter of his series. Though it is a draft, all it needs
a good run over for typos and it'll be the best with a nice cliffhanger at the end.
You are evil, Jim! ^_^
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Title: Nabiki - New Horizons
Segment: Chapter 23 - Return of the Ice Queen
Genre: Continuation
Author: G.L. Sandborn
Email: sandborn@microlink.net
Homepage: <http://www.microlink.net/~sandborn>www.microlink.net/~sandborn
Date Sent to FFML: April 27, 2000
Archive Number: 9904
Size: 67 KB
Series Summary:
This is the ongoing story of Nabiki Tendo after her marriage to a
wealthy man. Life is not as easy as she thought. They're both young,
bound by their Shinobi heritage, and struggling to make it in Hawaii.
The series also follows the other two Tendo sisters as they grow and
face not only the crazies found in Nerima but also the day-to-day
frustrations of becoming adults in Japan.
Segment Summary:
Soun Tendo finally returns with the missing Genma only to find his dojo
has been turned into an aerobics gym. Jeff gets help from his friends
in probing Jade's family background. Nabiki takes her first steps into
the real world of high finance. Meanwhile, Jade encounters little
Sodoshi's love for martial arts and gymnastics. She gets talked into
teaching her how to fight, despite Nabiki's wishes. Sodoshi's plans to
get her mother to attend her first gymnastics meet are foiled by her
mother leaving for Japan on business.
Review:
Another great chapter of the great Nabiki saga known as New Horizons. Still up
to standards and as magnificent as ever. Loved that aerobic class! ^_^ Anyway,
I see a problem with Sodoshi brewing up. This is a must read.
Crank out more and faster!
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Title: Ryoko Saotome background stories
Genre: RPG character background
Author: Thrythlind Hardwulf
Email: Thrythlind@aol.com
Homepage:
<http://members.aol.com/thrythlind/snake.html>http://members.aol.com/thrythl
ind/snake.html
Date Sent to FFML: April 20, 2000 (in 3 posts)
Archive Number: 9549, 9550, 9551, resp.
Size: 21 KB
Summary:
My Children of Nerima RPG character Ryoko Saotome's background stories.
Three short things I did while bored and stuck on other stories while
eagerly waiting for the game to begin. Considering scrapping the
singing one though... shrug.
Review:
No comment. That's all I'll say.
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Title: Those Who Hunt Ninja part 3
Genre: Original Flavor
Author: D.B. Sommer
Email: sommer@3rdm.net
Homepage:
<http://angcobra.jumpfun.com/dbsommer.html>http://angcobra.jumpfun.com/dbsom
mer.html
Date Sent to FFML: April 29, 2000
Archive Number: 9965
Size: 65 KB
Summary:
The final battle between the 'ninjettes' and the Ranma crew. And the
revelation of who the true mastermind behind this really is.
Review:
More for the comic master of slapstick that is D.B. Sommer!
An excellent conclusion to an incredibly funny fic, you just have to love this
guy for making all these jokes and comedic situations, something that takes
a lot of work.
Anyway keep it up and hope to see more of Mai, Tai and B.J!
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Title: Wheel of Fire
Segment: #31: War of the Tribes
Genre: Continuation
Author: Razorclaw X
Email: spiceoflife@hotmail.com
Homepage:
<http://www.crosswinds.net/~slythe/ranma/ranff.html>http://www.crosswinds.ne
t/~slythe/ranma/ranff.html
Date Sent to FFML: April 25, 2000
Archive Number: 9766
Size: 60 KB
Series Summary:
What is a wheel of fire but a spinning flame of eternal chaos? At the
center the flame burns brightest, extending outward to the edges of the
wheel along six spokes, where the flame smolders. Whether the flame
burns bright or not at all, the wheel continues to spin....
Segment Summary:
Mousse, now the master of the Amazons, receives unexpected visitors
amidst the warring chaos. Shampoo fights for her life, and the lives of
the rest of the tribe, as an unknown assailant preys on her dreams.
Which enemy is more dangerous: the one you know, or the one you don't
know?
Review:
Once more another chapter of WoF. Standard fare once again from Mr. X. Anyway,
if you're a fan you'll like it, but if not try it if it's your cup of tea. It's not mine.
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[Ranma 1/2 / Battletech]
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Title: Battletech: The Saotome Gambit Part 10
Genre: Fusion
Author: J. Austin Wilde
Email: wildeman@psn.net
Homepage: <http://www.psn.net/~wildeman>http://www.psn.net/~wildeman/
Archived at
<http://www.psn.net/~wildeman/TSG-10.txt>http://www.psn.net/~wildeman/TSG-10
.txt
Date Sent to FFML: April 23, 2000
Archive Number: 9690
Size: 104 KB
Series Summary:
A Ranma 1/2 - Battletech fusion pitting the might of the Furinkan
Combine, the League of Five Nails, and the Jusenkyo Commonwealth against
the beleaguered Nerima Confederation. The only hope for the Tendo
family lies in the hands of two Dispossessed mechwarriors named Saotome.
Segment Summary:
Ranma and Company escape with the fifth crypto key and with two new
comrades, Kodachi's fate is revealed, Shampoo is placed in command of
the _Jade Lotus,_ and Tatewaki Kuno falls in love with the Pig-Tailed
Girl!
Review:
Another great chapter of the must-read Battletech/Ranma crossover!
As always a high quality work from Mr. Wilde that just makes you want
him to write more and faster! ^_^ Anyway, read it if you haven't read it yet.
It's one of the greats.
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[SailorMoon / Terminator]
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Title: Eclipse of the Moon 2: Purification Day
Segment: Chapter 3
Genre: Adventure, Crossover, Satire
Author: Miashara
Email: s2mlmill@titan.vcu.edu
Homepage:
<http://www.execulink.com/~stryker>http://www.execulink.com/~stryker
Date Sent to FFML: April 24, 2000
Archive Number: 9723
Size: 15 KB
Series Summary:
Senshi vs Terminator
Segment Summary:
Bad guys seem to be popping out of the woodwork.
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Title: Eclipse of the Moon 2: Purification Day
Segment: The Rejected Chapter 3
Genre: Comedy
Author: Miashara
Email: s2mlmill@titan.vcu.edu
Homepage:
<http://www.execulink.com/~stryker>http://www.execulink.com/~stryker
Date Sent to FFML: April 25, 2000
Archive Number: 9803
Size: 14 KB
Series Summary:
Senshi vs Terminator
Segment Summary:
A completely pointless little bit. This was what I got the first time I
wrote chapter 3. Good for a chuckle but don't expect deep meaning and
emotional depth.
Review:
Miashara is one very screwed up guy. ^_^ Anyway, the man who cornered the
SM/Terminator fanfic market is at it again with two more hilarious chapters of
his fanfic. Anyway, they're a nice read, though they are sometimes a bit
misformatted and have a few typos. But still this fic'll never fail to make you
laugh.
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[Samurai X (Ruroni Kenshin)]
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Title: Doppleganger
Genre: Dark
Author: Bogue
Email: bogue@negia.net
Date Sent to FFML: April 29, 2000
Archive Number: 9978
Size: 9 KB
Summary:
An alternate version of the Rurouni Kenshin world.
Review:
Nice little dark work. Good to see Bogue again. ^_^
Anyway, pretty nice as I said and would have been interesting
how the world would have turned out with Himura still being
the Hitokiri Battousai.
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Title: Killing is Our Business... And Business is Good
Genre: Futuristic Blade Runner Legalistic Drama.
Author: Bogue
Email: bogue@negia.net
Date Sent to FFML: April 29, 2000
Archive Number: 9977
Size: 29 KB
Summary:
Two of the Rurouni Kenshin characters try to solve a murder in the
future. It's not as stupid as it sounds. Really.
Review:
Really, Bogue's telling the truth. Anyway, a nice little work again. Pretty cool too.
And it is somewhat normal. ^_^
Okay, what happened to the real you? ^_-
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[Slayers]
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Title: Kitsune Lina
Segment: Trails (10)
Genre: Action/Adventure (Je pense que oui)
Author: Thrythlind Hardwulf
Email: Thrythlind@aol.com
Homepage:
<http://members.aol.com/thrythlind/snake.html>http://members.aol.com/thrythl
ind/snake.html
Archived at <http://www.darknessrising.com/>http://www.darknessrising.com
Date Sent to FFML: April 21, 2000
Archive Number: 9579
Size: 9 KB
Series Summary:
Lina has been cursed with lycanthropy and as a result lost her magic.
Segment Summary:
Lina is pregnant and hiding in a cave, and the other Slayers continue
the search for her.
Review:
Let's just say this work just doesn't cut it like Kiyone Muyo, okay.
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Title: Original Sin/Justice in the Night/The Day After
Genre: Songfic/Romance/Humor (with Lemon)
Author: Thrythlind Hardwulf
Email: Thrythlind@aol.com
Homepage:
<http://members.aol.com/thrythlind/snake.html>http://members.aol.com/thrythl
ind/snake.html
Archived at
<http://members.aol.com/pookanopeeka/slayfic.html>http://members.aol.com/poo
kanopeeka/slayfic.html
Date Sent to FFML: April 21, 2000 (in 3 posts)
Archive Number: 9580, 9581, 9582, resp.
Size: totalling 33 KB
Summary:
A scattering of out of character images and scene ideas inputted between
lines to the song Original Sin. Followed by a lemon version of an
implied scene at the end of Original Sin, and then by the events of the
day after. Rather silly, people are out of character.
Review:
Okay, no comment.
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Title: The Path to Insanity
Genre: Humor (self-insert)
Author: Thrythlind Hardwulf
Email: Thrythlind@aol.com
Homepage:
<http://members.aol.com/thrythlind/snake.html>http://members.aol.com/thrythl
ind/snake.html
Archived at <http://www.darknessrising.com/>http://www.darknessrising.com
Date Sent to FFML: April 21, 2000
Archive Number: 9583
Size: 9 KB
Summary:
A behind the scenes look at the making of the Original Sin cycle... VERY
VERY silly... script form... I had too much caffeine at the time.
Review:
One question: do you care to look at what you post?
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[Sonic the Hedgehog]
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Title: Chaos Race
Segment: Part 1: Chaos
Author: Adrian Tymes (co-author Alessandro Sanasi)
Email: wingcat@pacbell.net
Archived at
<http://www.franken.de/users/deco/stories/tymes.html>http://www.franken.de/u
sers/deco/stories/tymes.html
Date Sent to FFML: April 25, 2000
Archive Number: 9819
Size: 28 KB
Series Summary:
After the fall of Robotnik, his android lieutenant Packbell continues
his work. Even Snively has been evicted. Thus, when Amy Rose convinces
Knuckles to bring the Floating Island to Knothole so she can confront
Sally for Sonic's heart, more than two parties are after the Chaos
Emeralds.
Segment Summary:
When the Floating Island comes to Knothole, trouble floats in with it.
But Packbell's designs on the island and its Chaos Emeralds are not all
that Sonic and company must deal with, for the island has a passenger:
Amy Rose.
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Title: Chaos Race
Segment: Part 2: Blue
Author: Adrian Tymes (co-author Alessandro Sanasi)
Email: wingcat@pacbell.net
Archived at
<http://www.franken.de/users/deco/stories/tymes.html>http://www.franken.de/u
sers/deco/stories/tymes.html
Date Sent to FFML: April 26, 2000
Archive Number: 9852
Size: 12 KB
Series Summary:
After the fall of Robotnik, his android lieutenant Packbell continues
his work. Even Snively has been evicted. Thus, when Amy Rose convinces
Knuckles to bring the Floating Island to Knothole so she can confront
Sally for Sonic's heart, more than two parties are after the Chaos
Emeralds.
Segment Summary:
As Sonic races to recover the blue emerald, he remembers a better time.
But then he encounters a packrat with Chaos powers, his memories are of
little help.
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Title: Chaos Race
Segment: Part 3: Yellow
Author: Adrian Tymes (co-author Alessandro Sanasi)
Email: wingcat@pacbell.net
Archived at
<http://www.franken.de/users/deco/stories/tymes.html>http://www.franken.de/u
sers/deco/stories/tymes.html
Date Sent to FFML: April 27, 2000
Archive Number: 9914
Size: 21 KB
Series Summary:
After the fall of Robotnik, his android lieutenant Packbell continues
his work. Even Snively has been evicted. Thus, when Amy Rose convinces
Knuckles to bring the Floating Island to Knothole so she can confront
Sally for Sonic's heart, more than two parties are after the Chaos
Emeralds.
Segment Summary:
Tails and Antoine set off for a place of evil, where the yellow emerald
has landed. In addition to finding their objective, they must also make
a new ally... before he can roboticize anyone.
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Title: Chaos Race
Segment: Part 4: Purple
Author: Adrian Tymes (co-author Alessandro Sanasi)
Email: wingcat@pacbell.net
Archived at
<http://www.franken.de/users/deco/stories/tymes.html>http://www.franken.de/u
sers/deco/stories/tymes.html
Date Sent to FFML: April 28, 2000
Archive Number: 9944
Size: 11 KB
Series Summary:
After the fall of Robotnik, his android lieutenant Packbell continues
his work. Even Snively has been evicted. Thus, when Amy Rose convinces
Knuckles to bring the Floating Island to Knothole so she can confront
Sally for Sonic's heart, more than two parties are after the Chaos
Emeralds.
Segment Summary:
Sally and Amy hunt for the purple emerald in Robotropolis. For nearly
any pair of Mobians, this would be a simple task. For these two,
however, it is a struggle just to keep off of each other's throats.
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Title: Chaos Race
Segment: Part 5: Red
Author: Adrian Tymes (co-author Alessandro Sanasi)
Email: wingcat@pacbell.net
Archived at
<http://www.franken.de/users/deco/stories/tymes.html>http://www.franken.de/u
sers/deco/stories/tymes.html
Date Sent to FFML: April 29, 2000
Archive Number: 9985
Size: 15 KB
Series Summary:
After the fall of Robotnik, his android lieutenant Packbell continues
his work. Even Snively has been evicted. Thus, when Amy Rose convinces
Knuckles to bring the Floating Island to Knothole so she can confront
Sally for Sonic's heart, more than two parties are after the Chaos
Emeralds.
Segment Summary:
The red emerald has landed inside the Forbidden Zone. The Freedom
Fighters and Snively arrive at about the same time, but two things
change the odds. Knuckles is one of them.
Review:
This is gonna be a mass review. Anyway, it is pretty good, though the formatting
and typos are sometimes quite distracting. Echidna not ehcinda, young man.
Anyway, as I said it is a piece of good work. Though I think not many people
had read it, chased away by the heading [Sonic]. ^_^ Well, a fine piece of
fanfiction, young man. Keep up the good work!
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