Greetings!
Um... apparently I got my internet access
just as TimeRunner got off his duff and got
around to mailing the fic. ^^; Ah well...
In any case, I'm not going to make any
comments about the comments about TR's
reprise of my fic, til I see the comments
on my reprise on his fic. I'm a coward,
yessiree. ^^;
Although my basic comment is...
There's a lot of neat stuff in TR's
version of Two Hearts that I'd've used
if I'd thought of it. But let's face it,
the guy DOES write differently from
me. Based on the comments, so far, I'm vague
to the point of obscurity and... well,
that's the way I like it. ^_^
Usually, even I don't make sense to me, so
I'll let people draw their own conclusions.
Okay, that's a mini-comment. Nevermind.
We'll give a more detailed reply when my
brain is working straight...
Sorry for the double post, though.
-sincerely, Scriv