:> Title: Master Battousai
:Ah, a story of gothic drama and angst and pathos that never manages to
take
:itself seriously. This _fits_ Kenshin very much, and your description is
:very vivid - you may want to define a few of the Japanese sword terms you
:use at the end for the ignorant reader, such as myself, but other than
that
:I liked it very much. Kenshin can manage to inject a bit of
lightheartedness
:into what would otherwise be a cue-up-Toccatta-and-Fugue dramatic scene,
and
:you use him very well to that effect. As I said, this _fits_, and I like
the
:continuation you've done so far as well. Keep writing!
Thanks for the comments and the encouragement!
Hmm, don't know about my story being a gothic
drama... I know I'm following some concepts of
Mosquiton, and that my writing somehow looks like
I'm describing a dark gothic world, but really,
Mosquiton ain't no gothic story! ^_^
Anyway, I've been thinking about adding a glossary
for quite some time. Especially considering that
I seem to use far more Japanese than the average
fic. I am actually contemplating cutting down on
the Japanese to make the fic more accessible.
Part 3 should be out any day now, but it's really
hard to write. So many tricky scenes I'm working
with.
Later!
Boyu