Subject: [FFML] Re: Comments
From: "James and the Bluejay" <alboro@wanderway.com>
Date: 4/28/2000, 3:23 PM
To: "David Johnston" <rgorman@telusplanet.net>
CC: "FFML Post" <ffml@fanfic.com>

Subject:
        [FFML] [fanfic][orig]Macho Caballo Chapter 36, First Steps are
Terrifying and Unremarkable
   Date:
        Tue, 25 Apr 2000 22:36:21 -0500
   From:
        "James and the Bluejay" <alboro@wanderway.com>

Description:

Comments:  Is Noah certain those girls are really his girlfriends?

Not sure exactly what you mean, but here goes:

Who, Noah?   Noah is a hired hand, a tracker and scout, working for 
Trader Larribee.  He is deeply respectful of his friend Comstock as well 
as Comstock's daughter Angie, and would never think of her as 
girlfriend material. Noah is also a confirmed bachelor who has little 
to do with romance and girlfriends (he was married once to a Sioux 
named Sue, but that is another story).  

He *is* certain that Lonesome is in deep trouble, however.   ^_^


 
  Angie was peering into the cool dimness of the building. "Well,
  the alcalde is sitting away from the rest of them.  I think he's


Shouldn't "alcalde" be capitalized?

Well, I have been called down on this before, so perhaps I had better
rethink my usage.  I have always thought that when I said 'the alcalde', 
it was the same as saying 'the mayor', and it was supposed to be 
lowercase.  Unless, of course, I was talking *to* the mayor, in which 
case I would use uppercase. ("Say, Mayor, could I do some politicking?")

I will research this with my language professor and correct the procedure 
in my internal automatic programming.

 
Sinestro?  Is he bright red?

^_^   No, not really.  He is simply...acquisitive.  I don't suppose it 
would be too much of a spoiler to say this (in fact, consider it a teaser 
for Part III, since Part II is going to grind slowly to a finish soon) but 
someone told Sinestro that the legendary Aztec gold was buried 
somewhere on the de Muerte spread.  Sinestro merely wants his 
share (100%).  



Thanks for the comments! 
James and the Bluejay
http://www.wanderway.com




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