To Esa Karjalainen :

*sigh*
Let me guess: You've never formally studied the
english language.

Well you guessed wrong. The reason why their is so many spelling errors and bad grammar it's because I don't put enough attention on what I have writen... At least that what my teachers told me. I can hope that I will get better with time.

I mean, you have a pretty good story here

Thank you!

, but...

Yeah, I know.

Sorry, I am not skilled enough to advice you properly with this,
but in general, your writing is clumsy, there are few spelling errors
and LOTS of bad grammar. also, your vocabularity seems a bit
limited. (then again, so's mine. ^^;)

The best cure for those problems is... to write. Also a few pre-reader would help too.

On the good side, your formatting is pretty good, and the text is readable,
and you seem to have an interesting story there.
*sigh*
I hope someone more skilled than I goes through this, to aid you properly

To Doug Davis :

I'd just like to comment on how much I'm begining to like this fic now.

I'm always happy to hear..eh .. read that.

When I read chapter one, I wasn't too excited.  It looked like just another
"Ranma-get's-a-power-hike-and-has-a-lot-fewer-problems"-

Fewer, no. Biggger, yes.

type 'o fic, but
now that you're actually going somewhere that I consider interesting with
it (not to mention the conflict looks like it'll be coming back),

Ranma is a trouble magnet after all.

I'll be
waiting for future chapters anxiously.

Because of my summer job I won't be able to write still September.

Please keep up the good work.

That I will!

To Richard Robinson :

Very good writing, you followed up the change in ranma's
history with logic and precision. I will grant the Devil
hunter Nodoka came out of nowhere but that seems to be the
general way people write that idea.

So Ranma has Shampoo, Ami, Yohko and a Tendo girl(s) after
him.

Don't forget Brush(Shampoo's rival) and the red haired girl.

That boy has the worst luck on his romantic life of
anyone in Anime. Of course Ukyou will probably show up
eventually just to keep things interesting.

You can bet on it!

Do you plan to explain why the Jhusenkyo Demons got loose or
is it just one of those things?

In chapter 3, Ranma will explain when he's asked by Yohko.

                                    Micronime

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