[FFML] [FFML][Fanfic][Ranma] Hard To Say Goodbye, chapter 17
Date:
Sun, 23 Apr 2000 01:35:57 +0100
From:
"Kayu-chan" <inu@yasha.fsnet.co.uk>
To:
"FFML" <ffml@fanfic.com>
Description: The collapse of Kuno's illusions and subsequent suicide
attempt have left him in the hospital but he's still rejecting
Nabiki despite their mutual sentiments.
Comments: Ah, so they begin to communicate. How nice. This is a
concept that has been done before, but the author has
made this a definitive version by pulling out all the stops to make
things difficult for Nabiki.
Subject:
[FFML] [FFML][fanfic][Ranma/OMGHonor on High Chapter 2 Meetings
(draft)
Date:
Sun, 23 Apr 2000 03:26:57 -0400
From:
Richard Robinson <RICHARDROBINSONJR@prodigy.net>
Description: Ranma turns out to be Belldandy's long lost kid or
something.
Comments: Doesn't make a whole heck of a lot of sense. Why would Mara
worry about endangering her fiance's soul? How else would she get him?
Subject:
[FFML] [ffml][Eva][Oneshot] "Ad Hoc"
Date:
Mon, 24 Apr 2000 23:22:41 -0400
From:
"Jerico E. Mele" <jmele@brandeis.edu>
Description: Little more than an idea.
Comments: There was a future after EoE? News to me.
ject:
[FFML] [ff][R1/2] Dead Butch, Part 1
Date:
Mon, 24 Apr 2000 18:34:28 -0700
Description: First person story from the point of view of a Ranma who
was somehow trapped in female form permanently
and is about to meet a Konatsu who never got his freedom.
Comments: Wow. What a remarkably unappealing title. Nicely
characterised, though.
ubject:
[FFML] [fanfic][Ranma] Clothes Make The... - Chapter 12 and
Epilogue
Date:
Sun, 23 Apr 2000 18:21:01 -0500
From:
Nicholas Leifker <nightelf@thekeep.org>
Description: This is the one where Ranma decides he likes being a girl.
Comments:
Nabiki nodded thoughtfully. "Okay. I... I think I'd be willing to
give you some Nyannichuan water. The Saotomes aren't the only ones
who
messed up your life, unfortunately; we'll let this constitute my
Nonsense. The Saotomes ARE the only ones who messed up Ukyou's life to
any significant extent, apart of course from the
Kuonjis.
He put his fingers up into a 'V' formation. "Ukyou, there are two
things I never joke about. One is money, and the other is love. I
Better add "now" to "joke about". Nabiki joked about love almost
incessantly.
I doubt, incidentally, that Akane would actually end up taller than her
father. She is, after all, not merely the youngest, but the
shortest of the three sisters and Soun appears to be a tall man (for his
environs).
ubject:
[FFML] [fanfic][Ranma][Comedy]Cupid, Chapter 1
Date:
Mon, 24 Apr 2000 08:33:36 PDT
From:
"AnoAnime .Com" <seekernba@hotmail.com>
Description: A supernatural matchmaker tries to solve Ranma's romantic
problems.
Script format.
Comments:
perfect example of the ultimate mother. But you also find it not
difficult to not see that there may be a jagged agenda under that
smooth
exterior.
In this case, there isn't. ^_^
This is almost very funny. Unfortunately it doesn't make enough sense
to make the punchline pay off. What was Ranma
before he was humanoid?
In re the author's comments about not getting comments...
Script format is a handicap. Oh, I know, it saves you from having to
think of synonyms for "said" and having to write in the
past tense, but it does make it harder
for people to get into it, and consequently narrows your audience. As
script format goes it isn't bad at all, but...
Oh...and I really think saying "What do you care" isn't enough for Akane
to knock Ranma into orbit. Honestly, that's
overkill. Ranma also doesn't have the foresight to carry warm water all
the time, in order to ensure that his curse will actually
inconvenience him. I'm also not thrilled that supernatural boy can kick
Ranma's ass in straight martial arts competition.
Subject:
[FFML] [Fanfic][El-Hazard] Mortal Engines - Chapter Twelve
Date:
Sun, 23 Apr 2000 16:02:10 -0400
From:
Alan Harnum <harnums@thekeep.org>
Description: The final confrontation with Jinnai's Demon-God
Comments: Blowed up real good, didney? Yeah...real good. May the good
Lord take a likin' to ya, and blow ya up real
soon...
ubject:
[FFML] [fanfic][orig]Macho Caballo Chapter 36, First Steps are
Terrifying and Unremarkable
Date:
Tue, 25 Apr 2000 22:36:21 -0500
From:
"James and the Bluejay" <alboro@wanderway.com>
Description:
Comments: Is Noah certain those girls are really his girlfriends?
Angie was peering into the cool dimness of the building. "Well,
the alcalde is sitting away from the rest of them. I think he's
Shouldn't "alcalde" be capitalised?
Sinestro? Is he bright red?
Subject:
[FFML] [slayers] Slayers Demiurge, Book Eight : Jihad
Date:
Sat, 22 Apr 2000 22:46:33 -0700 (PDT)
From:
twoflowr@maison-otaku.net (Twoflower)
"Mel, you don't know how a gun works any more than you do a fire spell,"
Myron the Merchant(tm) joked... but kept his voice low, so as not to be
overheard. "If anything, you'd have to study for years, with hard magical
training just to toss a small fireball. ANY idiot can pull a trigger. Which
do you think is safer?"
For the average user? The gun. That way you can rely on the competence
of the gun manufacturer rather than how closely you paid attention in
class. You don't play Mage, by any chance do you?
Now that Lina's no longer a teenager, doesn't all that eating make her
fat?
You know, really, using machines you don't understand may be Technology,
but it certainly isn't Science.