nifty little story.. unfortunatelly I werent able to acces the page you said the rest of the story was at..
"Hmm?" Nabiki pondered, looking at the bushes. *I
thought I heard something...* she thought. *Oh well, must be
my imagination.* With a quick twirl she set off after Ranma
and Akane.
sems kinda odd that Nabiki would notice this.. and it isn't important to the story taht she does.. so I would delete this part about her seeing it.
"You're not thinking of any hentai thoughts, are you?"
Huh, me? nooo... ^_^
After a masterful series of thrusts and counter-
attacks, Kunou suddenly gave a skillful upward blow which
cracked Ukyou's spatula right out of her hand. The oversized
cooking utensil arced highly into the air and embedded
itself in the ground some distance away from the two
combatants.
odd.. I always thought Ukyo was the better fighter of those two.. but then maybe she did't really try to win as this would in Kunou's eyes make Ukyo a sorcerrer and he would attack her every time he saw her..
The people at the park just stared at the mysterious cloud and
wondered amongst themselves.
No.. people in Nerima is used to this thing and if something like this didn't happen they WOULD start to stare..
As Ryouga began to tear the place up, the
people in the park began screaming and scattering wildly.
No as I said peopel are used to this thing so they would probably leave as soon as they saw Ryouga and Ranma at the same place..
Screams filled the air as the people who had
not fled the park now scambled on top of each other trying
to get away. A fight between two people was one thing, a
monster was something entirely different.
No.. people have seen Pantyhose Taro and such so sure they would react on the monster but screaming .. I don't know..
A globe of dark energy crackled at his fingertips. His
laughter broke out again, chilling their beings to the very
core.
Ranma and Ryouga stood up, taking combat stances in
front of the couple. "I can't believe that it would end like
this, Ryouga." Ranma said tiredly.
RANMA: SAOTOME SECRET TEQNUICE!!
and Ranma ran away ...
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