Subject: [FFML] Re: [Ranma/Mega X-Over] The Dark Crucible - Part 1
From: "Esa Karjalainen" <eruuska@ratol.fi>
Date: 4/27/2000, 10:52 AM
To: "Byooki Desu" <puppet_master@darkmail.com>
CC: <ffml@fanfic.com>


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"Hmm?"  Nabiki  pondered, looking  at  the  bushes.  *I
          thought I heard something...* she thought. *Oh well, must be
          my  imagination.* With a quick twirl she set off after Ranma
          and Akane.


sems kinda odd that Nabiki would notice this.. and it isn't important to
the story taht she does.. so I would delete this part about her seeing it.

Weell... it shows that there's something other than the usual Nerima
strangeness
around.


 "You're not thinking of any hentai thoughts, are you?"

Huh, me? nooo... ^_^

Usotsuki

               After  a  masterful  series  of  thrusts  and  counter-
          attacks,  Kunou suddenly gave a skillful upward  blow  which
          cracked Ukyou's spatula right out of her hand. The oversized
          cooking  utensil  arced highly into  the  air  and  embedded
          itself  in  the  ground  some distance  away  from  the  two
          combatants.


odd.. I always thought Ukyo was the better fighter of those two.. but then
maybe she did't really try to win as this would in Kunou's eyes make Ukyo a
sorcerrer and he would attack her every time he saw her..

Hey, Kuno's pretty good!
Remember, he was the best fighter around before Ranma came. Also, Ukyo ain't
that good - she's primarily a
cook and she doesn't really have a reason to train anymore, now that she
ain't after Ranma anymore.

No.. people in Nerima is used to this thing and if something like this
didn't happen they WOULD start to stare..

Hey, maybe they were curious what it was *this time*
I mean, it's better than watching TV ^^


    As Ryouga began to tear the place  up,  the
          people  in  the park began screaming and scattering  wildly.


No as I said peopel are used to this thing so they would probably leave as
soon as they saw Ryouga and Ranma at the same place..

*nodnod*

or, at least take a safer distance ^^



Screams filled the air as the people who  had
          not  fled the park now scambled on top of each other  trying
          to  get  away. A fight between two people was one  thing,  a
          monster was something entirely different.

No.. people have seen Pantyhose Taro and such so sure they would react on
the monster but screaming .. I don't know..

So?
Besides, "Dodge and Panic" is a good reflex ^^



               A  globe of dark energy crackled at his fingertips. His
          laughter broke out again, chilling their beings to the  very
          core.
               Ranma  and  Ryouga stood up, taking combat  stances  in
          front of the couple. "I can't believe that it would end like
          this, Ryouga." Ranma said tiredly.


RANMA: SAOTOME SECRET TEQNUICE!!

and Ranma ran away ...
*nodnod*



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