(snip)

       Akane frowned, wondering what Shampoo was up to, but
said nothing.  She was going to keep a close eye on Amazon,
however.

Wasn't there another fic where Shamps does almost the same thing? Called
"the soft touch" or something like that?

Over all, it's okay. Hopefully there is mayhem coming, without too much
standard cookie-cutter characterization.

Colleen
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