Cute. ^_^
IMO it could be a little "tighter".
It's a bit wordy in spots, but all-in-all
a rather enjoyable short story.  Nice balance
of humor and dark. 

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 And, if any is left, I buy food and clothes."-Erasmus

"A man is a small thing, and the night is large 
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