On Sat, 22 Apr 2000, Elsa Bibat wrote:
Title: Olvido
Archived at http://24.31.125.242/cgi-bin/RetrieveStory.exe?StoryID=149660
Review:
This ... is ... cool! ^_^ Sorry about that. The writing is
incredible. And your
style fits this fic so well. And the wind motif that runs through the chapter
is somehow appropriate. I've read part one again and the motif of the wind
in the second part is a good counterpoint to the numbers motif of number
one.
Thank you very much. It's really fun to write, I'm just trying not to go
over the top. :)
Dare I guess what motif would part three have? ^_^
Dancing. Lots and lots of dancing. And in a bizarre twist, Ukyo and Ranma
show up and Ukyo's pregnant! Then the A-team crashes the whole party.
And Kasumi is wonderfully...darker for this series. I must praise you
for that.
Keep up the good work and crank this out faster!
I hope I can. The story's been plotted out for more than a year, but one
detail was bothering me enough that it was turning into a writer's
block. That and I've been busy and I drink too much. Thanks for your
comments, I'm just happy that the story doesn't suck. So far, at least.
Expect another part in less than a month. Hopefully.
Colleen
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