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From: "Elsa Bibat" <aerolbj@i-next.net>
To: <ffml@fanfic.com>
Sent: April 22, 2000 11:07 AM
Subject: [FFML] [C&C] Synopsis List Review for April 14
Title: Le Plus Ca Change...
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Review:
Dave, I've got a big problem with your fic.
I hate Lonko.
Not the character, though she is like a very, very, unpolished Ranma. The
name grates on my ears. I hate the name. Couldn't you just made it Ranko?
Well, I was tempted, but I wanted to make her stand out from the
million-and-one other fanfiction Rankos, if only in name. If anyone else
out there on the list thinks it's a clinker, I'll change it. (let me know
privately, of course)
Anyway, this is a pretty weird little fic. I'm used to second generation
fics,
but this? Well, it's weird in a Ranma-esque sort of way. Pretty good
though.
I try...
Keep it up and a little polish. And change Lonko's name!
Whoa. If that's the WORST you have to say about my fic, I guess I'm
gettin' better at this!^_^
Thanks for the advice!