From: "Thomas Hood" <thood@cs.mun.ca>
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From: "Mathew Calvin" <FFML@softhome.net>
To: <ffml@fanfic.com>
Sent: Thursday, April 20, 2000 7:20 PM
Subject: [FFML] Re: [Ranma][Draft] Birthright
Well I disagree. That _IS_ the point of the [ALT] Tag. I found the
story
very good. Who's to say that since it's an alt Genma didn't teach him
better manners and less martial arts (HA!). Or just that he is a nicer
person in this alt-universe.
It's not neccessarily about Ranma being a nicer person. He would still
have
a problem with Akane being better than him, as one person had said, it
would
invalidate the whole reason for the ten year long training trip that was
his life. He doesn't have anything else, and this girl, who DOES have a
life outside of martial-arts, is actually as good as if not better than
him?
I'd have a big problem with that myself if I were him.
And the [ALT] tag doesn't mean a thing if you don't give a reasonable
explanation for the change.
Thomas Hood
thood@cs.mun.ca
Ranma is also a nice guy. He really doesn't hate anyone in the entire series
(he gets miffed, and then he gets over it). And while I haven't *implicitly*
stated why Akane is better, I have put some hints in there (a small part
that I rewrote). I'm trying to do a seriel type storyline, where things that
aren't immediately obvious will come out in tim.
And it's a concept test. How do you write Akane being better that Ranma,
while Ranma hasn't changed?