Cute, very cute

However:

Counsel, not councel.  I counsel you to look it up next time! ^_^

Fiancees (plural), not fiancee's (possessive) - all the fiancees were
standing in the doorway.  Ranma noticed that Akane was carrying a
hockey stick.  The expression on his fiancee's face was not pleasant.


Kara



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